|Reviews for Troll! Troll in the Dungeon|
| Cristin Gryphon chapter 1 . 3/9
very nice, it was a decent way to spend a half hour. the only complaint i might have is i want the rest of the story. Anyway, thank you for taking the time to wright and post this.
| HoosierCullen chapter 1 . 3/8
I loved this and could seriously see this being a multi chapter fic where the canon decisions Harry made are quite different thanks to having Neville as his friend in place of Ron. I also think that it would be interesting to see the relationship between Harry and Hermione grow and blossom from the beginning. Again good work and thank you.
| gaul1 chapter 1 . 3/8
| dmn410 chapter 1 . 3/2
excellent story. I have always enjoyed your work, and this is a superb entry!
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 2/26
Go ahead and bash away, Mr. Tumbleweed. Ron may be a formidable chess player, but he is jealous, lazy, spoiled, and self-indulgent. The only difference between him and Draco, IMO, is money. I'll never understand the Ron-Hermione pairing any more than the Harry-Ginny one. (Sorry, but I do have my reasons.)
Also, I've always thought Neville makes a much better third for Harry and Hermione than Ron ever did. You can bet your wand Neville would NEVER have left in the middle of the Horcrux hunt ... and Ron would never have had the guts to go against the Carrows without Harry and Hermione behind him. Actually, that's probably why JKR left Neville in the castle. The Hogwarts kids needed a champion, and Ron was simply not up to the task. Fortunately, Harry and Hermione could still function without Ron, when necessary.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22
This is a very well written, it is well thought out chapter, that has a good flow, and could very well be the start of something special, I would be intrested to see where you are going with this as it has captured the reader intrested which is the key to a good story as the reader wish to read more.
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 1 . 2/22
This was great! Will there be a sequel?
| ptl4ever419 chapter 1 . 2/21
Loved it :)
| GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 2/17
This was indeed a unique story, which included some unique combinations of cliches. Please continue with your entertaining stories.
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 2/15
Very nice story. JKR recently admitted in an interview that she regretted pairing Hermione with Ron and not Harry. Also, it was so out of character for Harry to tolerate Ron saying Hermione was a nightmare merely because moRon could not do the levitation charm.
| Kai chapter 1 . 2/13
Yay! There can never be enough Ronald!bashing in the world.
Your Harry and Hermione are so cute and Neville is definitely a better friend than Mr Slacker.
I love it!
But now the story cries for an additional 500,000 words of Harmony cuteness and real heroes. And Snape!bashing and Dumble!bashing and even more Ronald!bashing and lots of otherWeasley!bashing... *sigh* Wishful thinking!
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 1 . 2/14
I know it's a one shot, but this has definite potential for a full blown rewrite of the books. I, for one, would love to see the fallout of this. Especially if Minerva calls the DMLE for an action report on the troll getting in the castle, as well as the blocks on Harry. Also would like to see the morning conversation between Harry and Hermione, with Neville of course.
Cliché or not, this would be a fantastic full blown story.
| Deathday Party Planner chapter 1 . 2/13
A very nice story, thank you for sharing it with us! I have no problem with Ron's dialectic. It is no worse than what we routinely see for house elves, though I think all the boys' speech was pretty salty for their age. As a HHr shipper, I wish JKR's version of the 'Troll in the Bathroom' had been a little closer to your's. It might be time for you to try your hand at a novel length project. Thanks, again.
| Wolfric chapter 1 . 2/9
I enjoyed your fine story and am glad to see another one from your hand. Thanks for writing. W.
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 2/9
Really good! I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future!