Reviews for Twilight Revenge
monay9e chapter 4 . 5/17/2019
Please finish this story.
BabisV chapter 4 . 7/13/2017
It's a shame you stopped writing as both this one and all your other stories are all very well written and amazingly awesome! I really hope you continue them some day...
Prince Pondincherry chapter 4 . 10/18/2016
Whoa! Ghosts too?
Bella's internal monologue during the "soulful staring" was hilarious.
Prince Pondincherry chapter 3 . 10/18/2016
I wonder why Isabella thinks making her smell tasty to vampires is a good idea. Unless the Cullens are "vegetarians" like in canon, and Isabella doesn't seem to think they are, this just seems suicidal.
Fireweedfield chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
This was great and the staring-into-eachother's-eyes part was hilarious, I love how you kept parts of the original story but actually, you know, gave logical explanations to them :) Also dat cliffie doe!
Update soon please?
Publicola chapter 1 . 4/15/2015
Holy crap. Holy crap. I've never seen this used as the premise for a Twilight fic before, but I like it. Adding in a Tarantino-esque revenge-plot element can only improve a story when it is as atrocious as canon Twilight was. Definitely looking forward to more...
SuperiorDimwit chapter 3 . 3/7/2015
Was waiting for the comment on Ed's looks. *fist pump* I lean towards the constipation option.

Oh my, all this personality and cleverness flooding the story from all directions. I feel like doing a Viktor Frankenstein and exclaiming "It's alive!" Which I had really never thought I would say about anything relating to this cadaver. You're really making such a good job with this.
SuperiorDimwit chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
LOVE this. Absolutely love it!
SuperiorDimwit chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
*clap clap clap*

You are actually making me believe that it's possible to take a turd and polish it to shine like gold. This premise is so much better than that of the original series. And seriously, extra kudos for letting Bella herself deliver that well-earned boot to her personality-devoid original: it makes me feel like some patron deity of the literary arts has finally been avenged for the insult that was Twilight.
Le Chasseur chapter 4 . 2/12/2015
Oh shit, seriously ?
This, is genius. IT MUST CONTINUE !
me chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
I'm a very serious twilight fan and don't get me wrong your story if you were a fan you could make it way more vampic. Its a really good story. Except for the pats of Charlie dieing.
pickles-cat24 chapter 3 . 2/6/2014
so far so good! love the idea!
Fancyunicorn chapter 3 . 2/6/2014
Me: DAMN GIRL YOU GOT DADDY ISSUES AND EDWARD ISSUES! Edward: You know it's not like she wants to watch me burn or anything but i think she has more than daddy issues and Edward issues T_T. Bella: HAY it's not like one of you blood sucking creatures killed my dad. Edward: its not like your dad had supernatural issues or anything and was going to die soon anyways. Bella: *glares* Edward: *glares back* Me: WELLLLLLLLL acting time is over QUIT IT YOU GUYS Vampire Bella: *removes make up* THANK GOD i don't think i could pretend anymore. Edward: I love you Bella Vampire Bella: I love you to Me: OMFG NO SHUT UP
Fancyunicorn chapter 2 . 2/6/2014
ello luv chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Oh my god. Yes. Please continue this.
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