Kurama lashing out against Asura was probably my favorite thing to read in months.

Wow. That was quite the twist and turn. I can only assume Asura intervened because Indra clowning about attracted his attention deep within Naruto, then the bit in his mind happened...and, well, the rest is history.

I say: that ending is an unconventional risk.

Let's see if it pays off.

Increadible.

I'm impressed. Very few fics is so well written and compelling at the same time.

The progression of the plot is exciting and new. I have no idea what is going to happen, and I'm suprised at every turn. Your fightscenes are superb and descriptions amazing. The characters are belivable and wonderfully written.

All in all, this is a very good story. Be proud of yourself for having made it.

Lastly, I will say, do this at your own pace. Don't feel presured to write more than you want. You are uploading this free of charge on the internet, and your readers have no right to demand anything from you. Thank you for writing it. I hope you enjoy it.

This is a good story, but such a cliffhanger. *le sigh* I hope that I find out what Sasuke is going to do.

Amazing chapter. One question, how did Sasuke learn Indra's name? He only knew him as the First Born. Was it because of the switch in control or something like that? Anyways, curious to see what you do with this story.

this is one of the best naruto stories in fanfiction but very few finish the stories so please continue this story

Oh come on its awesome pleaso continue this story !

this is awesome. enough said.

Wow, that was quite the kickass, high powered fight. I'm desperately hoping that Sasuke encounters one of the shades of Naruto's parents, because a conversation between this Sasuke and one of them would be quite interesting.

As is, I'm impressed with the emotion you put into Sasuke taking back control.

Really, all this build up is gonna make the eventual fallout when Sasuke reveals his issues with the biggest idiot in the series after what he did to his family. And I don't mean Naruto, amusingly enough.

Keep up the good work.

OMG FHHRVDHCHSBDUSKPWYDGCVXGJSSVGDHD I CAAAAAAAAANTT THIS IS SOOO FREAKING AWESOOOMMMEEEEEE

YOU KEPT ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT FOR EVERY MOMENT OF READING THIS FIC

I WILL KILL SOMEONE IF YOU ABANDON THIS FIC.!

XD

GoodWork

I don't care what anybody says this chapter is my new canon. I need more

The journal entry at the beginning of this chapter, though I'm not sure if I've ever said, I consider absolute fucking genius.

God, Indra is fucking hardcore, stabbing the tails? Like what

"Um lmao guys"

"what"

"like, where's the Kyuubi? I can't like, find it"

"what do you mean you cant find it"

"I MEAN I FUCKING LOST IT, OK?"

Does Indra want to bum Asura. It's gay. IT'S HOT, AND IT'S GAY

The thing about Naruto one day betraying Sasuke is depressing because now it has to happen and I'm sad.

"Sasuke, I am so very sorry" is such a hard hitting and sad line, because Indra seems so genuinely upset. I guess he must have personally had a hard time? Not sure I'm such a fan of Asura now. :(

"ok Naruto I'm going to enter where no one has entered you before"

"what"

I enjoyed this chapter immensely. 3