i am glad you acknowledged the uchiha were discriminated against and had valid reasons to attempt a coup.

I love reading this take on Sasuke. Obviously OOC, but entertaining to see nonetheless. I can't wait the keep reading!

so...Sasuke didn't actually you know what happened, right. this is just an illusion..another genjutsu. Uhh, Naruto is going to..i'm excited and scared for them.

lol Suigestsu, do you wanna duck out now? this is a really awesome twist! oh YESS!

No way! You make Sasuke sound human and like he has a heart! like, like a good guy. I'm really swayed to almost even feeling that Sasuke is a real caring friend. This is an interesting side of things I didn't really think about, but I think it'd definitely be cannon true if Sasuke had been lot less jealous and full of hatred.

AHHHH THIS SI AMAZING. THE LINGUISTICS. THE GRAMMAR. THE VERBOSITY. THE PLOT. THE EMOTIONS. EVERYTHING. ALL OF IT IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. I know it’s prob too late being that it’s been about three years but if you could it would be amazing if you could just write one more chapter! Although this chapter is a cliffhanger... and it’s a pretty good “ending” cliffhanger. GREAT JOB

If you can make Sasuke into the hero, you're officially a better writer than Kishimoto. Exceptional work!

Oh. Oh man. Why oh why must this fic be (at least clinically) dead? That last line.

There is a *depressing* lack of Ashura/ Indra-centric stuff in this fandom. And it's inexcusable, because we've known about them for how long now? But this. While it's taken forever to get to this, seeing as the first half of this fic is basically a canon rehash with minor tweaks. And I'm one of those that has a... distaste for first person narrative, so that was added pain.

But with all that said, that last scene alone makes it *100% worth it.*

If you're still alive and in the fandom, you have my respect. Good luck with your writing, wherever that may take you.

I'm not sure how I feel about this arc. It kinda went completely out of control there. Also, the Sharingan blindness rate is completely out of whack (in Canon too). About 30 mins go Susanou and it's done? Like come on.

Oh fuck. Is this gonna be what I think it is?

This marks the key difference between Canon and your world. From now on, it's a free country.

Sasuke sure is abusing the heck out of the physics engine.

Sasuke really feels human here. Especially his interactions with Karin, and the way he abused the Sharingan for what was most certainly not its intended use... He's a healthy teenage boy alright.

This should be interesting.

Aww come on don‘t leave us like that... Though I imagine why you ‚killed‘ Sasuke. If I had to take a guess Naruto would like in canon use the Talk no Jutsu on Nagato...