AWESOME story! Completely original!

Amazing so far, and I'll read more as soon as possible. This may be an old fic, but that doesn't mean it's not fantastic.

~blazing

This was such a cute story.

i absolutly love it that Sev was the main character. Matty was a cute character too. i think the entire thing with Voldie was really interesting. and it was so sweet seeing Harry as sev's older brother. this entire story has been wonderfull.

i think the characterization and events of Severus and Matty were my favorite. and his wandless magic and other perks were also very interesting.

besides the fact i loved the story and enjoyed reading it. I'm extremely mad that you didnt finish! how could you just stop. i couldnt wait to see Lucius meet Sev. not to mention i REALLY want to know what happens. Shame on you. i hope you feel really contrite right now. im sure your fans are a bit mad at you. you really should continue this story.

well, thanks for writing the story. it was my first fic with Sev as the main character.

Ja ne~

~ Kari ~

Gre...Gre...Great! Absolutely AMAZING story. But Hey...finish it...Please? Cos Hey, Re-Read six, if you haven't already. The Loating and Hate, He was hating himself for what he did, and Dumbledore was dying anyway. Avada Kedavra amounts to mercy among Death-Eaters, cos, like, think about it, They can torture people horribly, You don't know what that Poison was doing to Dumbledore, but I bet it was a lot more painful than Avada Kedavra. He's a good guy. Cos hey, he's a genius, so I don't think he'd be stupid enough to rejoin Voldemort. Besides, There's still something strange about him. He's ompelling, and your story shows him as a frightened twelve year old once more. You get a look at whats really going on in that clever brain of his, and you can't help feeling sorry for this kid that went through hell at Voldemorts hands. FINISH IT, PLEASE!

Wow. That is a good story so far. I cant wait for the next chapter. I love how there are all these layers of deception and meaning, hints about things that you dont reveal right away. Keep it up!

I love this fic. Keep up the good work. I hope Clarance finds a cure for Severus soon so he can be back to his usual snarky self. Not that i don't like Severus/Matty though I love this fic and you have done a wonderful job. Keep up the fab work and please update soon.

Cya Aussie Mel

I really like your story but Snape was born in 1960, so he would be 35 not 40. Bust still i LOVE your story! :)

I just finished the first chapter and wanted to point out something. Severus's dialogue lapses sometimes. The diction is a little inconsistant, and he uses phrases and words that seem more advanced than what a 12 year old would normally use. They seem more narrative, especially some of the descriptions.

'He seemed to find this amusing, so he lowered me back to my feet. Half afraid of another attack, I didn't let go of his wrist.' That part just strikes me as out of place or worded oddly or something. Anywhoo, back to reading!

Well, I guess since you haven't updated since 2003, you've abandoned this fic, even though you said you wouldn't, but I really wish you wold continue it, because it is really well written, and there's an actual plot

Amazing story!

Holy... *stunned* This story is beautiful. I adore it! I think that the story would be best if Severus remained as a child. Because he is just much cuter that way. I liked it when Tryna asked if she could keep Severus! XD I'm trying to use subliminal messages, is it working?

Seriously.

I love this story. It's amazing and well written (VERY well written) and you've completely pulled me into it. I want to cry every time Severus feels trapped by HIM and every time he forces himself into two people... It's completely and utterly unfair. *whimpers*

I _ADORE_ Clarence! he's so much fun! I love his Snape impersonations. (that's half of the reason why I vote for Snape!Child - his class can be taught by Clarence...) And his devotion to Snape is funny. I love how he put the Gryffindors into Detention so he could pump them for information on Matty. XD It was delightful! *laughs*

~ Melody

brillant story, await on the next chapter of Lucius and young Severus, and how voldemort will treat young severus.

This is a wonderful story and it would really be a shame if you didn't finish it.

Simply breathtacking and VERY clever! I like this fic a lot! You're an exelent writer!

What fun! I was going to review this right after reading it, but the site was broken, and now I've forgotten what I wanted to say. I liked this, and I'm favorite-ing it, and am looking forward to more. Thanks.