*Sigh*, this is such a great story. Particularly its captivating, original plot and your fun and detailed writing style with subtle and delightfully unexpected humor. I revisit it often just for these reasons and reread it when I think I've forgotten enough to make it an interesting read again, but it really would be nice to know how it ends! With all the hints you've given along the way I'm sure I wouldn't be surprised by the ending, but knowing how it will probably end and reading how well you put it all together are two entirely different things.

With how old this story is I'm sure you'll never finish it, but I wanted to send this anyway so you'd know there's still someone current who really enjoys this story.

Have fun with RL

This is wonderful! I'm upset you didn't finish it, but 25 chapters is better than nothing so I'm glad you wrote this :) The plot and the characters are awesome and I love Severus/Matty!

wow this is amazing!

OH MY #$%&*( %$ COME ON! I READ THIS WHEN I WAS LIKE 9 AND RECENTLY REREAD IT BUT REALLY?! I'VE READ AND REREAD IT SO MANY TIMES BUT FOR HOW MANY YEARS?! I'M NOT GOOD AT MATH SO I'LL TELL YOU SOME OTHER TIME! BUT REALLY NO UPDATE IN LIKE AT LEST 13 YEARS?!

I like the story so far. I haven't seen anything overly Cliché yet. (which is a pretty awesome thing) I also wanted to point out that you spell his name as Lucius (this is Malfoy) and Not Lucious...

Update please? I need to know how Severus gets out of Voldemort's clutches this time, especially since Voldemort pretty much knows that Severus isn't really on his side.

good story please finish it

That was brillant! I am so sad that this story will never be completed because it was quite compelling ! Thank you, you did a wonderfull story and caracters with only the first four books material!

I just love this. I just love this so much. It's awesome. Some of the information takes some getting used to, because after reading the Half Blood Prince it doesn't all match up, but I can see why you'd want to keep it like this because it's great. Is Katryna Tragyl an OC? Because she's brilliant. I think Clarence is brilliant too and you've got Severus' character down wonderfully.

Please tell me this isn't a dead fic. It's wonderful, and I want to know what happens. Please finish it!

wow, oh i hope you find time to finish

Wow, that kid was born to be a double agent

Gosh I just LOVE this story! I haven't decided if I like kid!fics or not because they are all so predictable and one can only read the same basic plot in so many ways before it gets dull (Romeo and Juliet, anyone?). But this is just so brilliant I can't stop reading it!

I'm noticing it's not marked as "complete", though, and that depressed me almost as much as noticing you stopped writing on this over a decade ago:( While it's unlikely you'll ever complete it-if you're even still on this site-I'll say it anyway... PLEASE WRITE MORE!

In the meantime, I will enjoy my steady approach to the inevitable maddening cliffhanger at the end of your last update (because, let's face it, that's where ALL the good stories are left to putter at!), and then fret for days about "what happens next?!".

Don't know if you'll get this, but once again, I'M LOVING WHAT I'M READING and wish it wouldn't end!

This story is brilliant! The amount of moments in the fix where I have either burst out laughing or an nervously biting my nails is now well into the double digits!
Please write more and update soon!
This story has so much potential and I'd love to see more!

:-)