Reviews for Twelve Again |
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Guest chapter 17 . 12/29/2002 Hey good story. Please no : slash : sex with or as minors : thanks. Your stoy does not need any useles plot fillers. |
linaeviel chapter 16 . 12/29/2002 I love your fic! And I'm glad there aren't any romance triangles-in my opinion, it would take away from the main plot. Then again, that's just my opinion. I'm sure whatever you choose to do for the upcoming chapters will be perfect, because so far the fic is amazing! Keep up the excellent work and please update soon! ) |
Jam-jackson chapter 16 . 12/28/2002 Hey, I really like this story. I'm really glad that I found it. I'm basically a closet Snape (And Evil!Percy, but thats not the point) fic fan, so I enjoyed this story more than most people would expect, and I can't wait for more! Jam |
La Femme Fatale chapter 16 . 12/27/2002 Oooooh! So cool! more, please! |
A Darker Shade of Bright chapter 16 . 12/26/2002 Um, I haven't read the reviews for this story, so I don't know if anyone's suggested it. But have you thought of a bit where Matty/Severus sees a picture of Professor Snape? I'd like to see his reaction to that. And maybe also to see his old quarters that he kept as professor. I really like this new young Snape, and since this story is about him, it's very good. But I would like to see some more emphasis on "old Snape", as he's who drew me to this story in the first place. Maybe from visiting his old office he'll gain some more memories or something. I'm also looking foreward to that scene where he finds out about why he became a death eater in the first place, and for another scene with Remus. Keep writing! I'm intrigued! |
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 16 . 12/25/2002 Cool story. I still hope that Sev gets cured sooner rather than later, but in my opinion, please PLEASE no sev-or-matty/katryna. It just seems...wrong. Hmm. Anyway, update soon! |
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 14 . 12/25/2002 Ooooh boy. Sevvie really is developing a split personality. Poor baby. Anyway, I'm off to bed, as it is now 4:30 in the morning. Can't wait to read some more of this later! |
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 8 . 12/25/2002 Eek! He's adorable! Almost wish he were my kid _~ Great chapter! |
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 5 . 12/25/2002 I just started this story today. What a great plot! Twelve-year-old Sevvie is so sweet, and I'm glad he's getting along with Harry and Remus. He needs that. As for the poll, if you still want opinions, I'd like to see Sev get cured. I think that would be the happy ending: maybe Sev is different, but I know *I* certainly wouldn't want to go through my adolescence again. Anyway, I'm off to read a few more chapters before bed. I need to know what happens to Sevvie! |
Phoenix Flight chapter 16 . 12/24/2002 I don't like romance much. This story is brilliant! I have never seen a truely good time travel HP fic, whether it is Harry and crew going back in time or the previous generation going forward. Until now, that is. I have seen ones that are decent, and some that are /bad/, but this is the only one that has a original plot, and interesting story, is well written, you get the picture- this is a wonderful story! |
Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 16 . 12/24/2002 *applause* - Keep up the great work and the frequent updates. And please. Please, pretty please, my vote is for no romance with Katryna. That's the only reason I haven't been counting her as an (interesting but a) Mary Sue type of character (although she's skirting the edge IMHO). She's cool as she is and the story's moving along interestingly. I love how Sev/Matty freaked out Sirius in Ch 15... Thanks! |
Deritine chapter 16 . 12/24/2002 I can't wait to see where you are taking this. I'm completely clueless :) Unusual, I must say. We need some action! Whoo- hoo! I love this story! |
Tardis 2010 chapter 16 . 12/24/2002 Clarence sounds VERY indimidating, I'd be scared. Update soon, I am so hanging on the edge of my seat. |
Quilynn chapter 16 . 12/24/2002 You mentioned Hannah! (Thanks!) I want to see more with Clarence (speaking of which, write a part for your Tragyl story) and more with Katryna, too. Great characters you've got there! Great part, keep it up! |
Ariana Deralte chapter 16 . 12/24/2002 I would think Katryna would be a bit suspicious of Matty's skill in potions. Loved the scene with uncle albus. Clarence was amusing. He does seem to have been learning well. So he and Menteron switched places huh? I don't suppose we'll get to see that any time soon in your Tragyls at Hogwarts stories?...which reminds me, when will you be updating the others? I love this story, but I love all your others as well. Please write more of everything soon:) |