Reviews for Namikaze Naruto: The Peace Seeker |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is not quite a favorite, yet not far from it. World building is difficult, and yet you did a pretty good job at it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing... Please continue Posting stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. This story reads and flows so well. I was ill so I decided to binge read fanfiction and it only took me 10 hours to read this entire 300,000 word story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() only flaw I'm seeing in his UN plan, besides the obvious, is the fact that he isn't the strongest. to lead an organization in the naruto world you have to be the strongest, just like kages. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well hello Naruto Woodrow lmfao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() for all you people who are having problems with his new personality think about it, he almost gets killed by his best friend just for power this is way more practical than the anime where he just won't give up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, I just started reading and I have liked this so far :o, although I do believe You need to try being a little less redundant on Some sentences. It would really help to reduce a few lines and, overall, make reading more enjoyable. (example: when Naruto had requested the elders for Senjutsu training. It could've been: A month ago, Naruto had requested the elders to training him in Senjutsu after Itachi mentioned that Jiraiya was very powerful when using it, seeing that there was nothing he could teach to Naruto. After all, Naruto only had to perfect his Ninjutsu and Fuiinjutsu arsernal.) |
![]() ![]() Im more afraid of you making Naruto to weak, I mean have you even considered what you did with his training? 3 years, and he can make 2000 clones no problem, so if we round down ALOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT we can still say he trained for more then 500 years, thats a shit load, and I just cant see him having any problems at all, and if he does its just bad writing during training chaps. |
![]() ![]() I hope its not Ino, they dont fit. |
![]() ![]() I just hope he dosnt go over and above Itachi in behaviour, I mean even Itachi showed emotion and care for the people he cared for, like Sasuke. I dont want Naruto to be cold toward lets say Tsunade just because this "transformation" demands it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story |
![]() ![]() So naruto is a gay slave in your story |
![]() ![]() BRAVO, BRAVO BEAUTIFUL STORY:) 5 STARS! |
![]() ![]() Thanks for a great story |