Reviews for Namikaze Naruto: The Peace Seeker |
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![]() ![]() All this cloak and dagger "behind the scenes" crap is annoying. You had a pretty cool idea, but you haven't executed it properly. Better luck in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best naruto fanfics I have read . |
![]() ![]() It's a good concept. It's just that your writing really sucks. And the grammar is horrible as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you are looking for romance do not read this fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is it that Natuto's personality changes so quickly? How is it that his vocabulary suddenly changed? These are just small problems that I find a little annoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story but right now I think your forgetting a key fact in every shinobi... they have odd qirks and im not seeing any in Naruto... he is to calm and emotionless... and in all honesty it makes him boring. Though your fanfic is still good... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutley love kabuto and orochimaru relationship in this fic... your doing great awesome story. |
![]() ![]() ughhh i never understand why in some fics naruto would get pissed at his dad for saving the vilalge from the kyuubi the only way he knew how to. Like would he prefer konoha to be razed to the ground and allow the kyuubi to potentially raze other villages? thats just rude |
![]() ![]() sasuke ha nulla da vantarsi uccidendo Itachi gia in punto di morte!dimosta solo quanto di un debole ke e'-e la sua mentalita IO SONO IL MIGLIORE DI TUTTI E TUTTI SONO SOTTO LE MIE SUOLE FATATE ATTEGGIAMENTO lo rende solo di piu cio ke realmente e' UN COGLIONE!Itachi avrebbe risparmiato a tutta Konoha un sacco di pive se lo eliminava fin dall'inizio! |
![]() ![]() siii muori sasuke muoriiii |
![]() ![]() naruto ha chiesto temari di sposarlo ho letto,giusto?allora Yugito? e la daymio? insomma non capisco dove e x queste due poverette il lieto fine ma almeno tutto si e risolto con Iwa entrare nell'alleanza. |
![]() ![]() povera MiYuky ke brutta fine |
![]() ![]() kakashi sta ancora commiserandosi x essere una merda di sensei al cap.26 WHAHAHAHAHAHAHA |
![]() ![]() onu ucc nazioni unite...la mia testa scoppia!AIUTO!dove diamine hai preso tutti questi argomenti pazzeschi?DOPPIO AIUTO! |
![]() ![]() un intero capitolo x naruto sbarazzarsi di 5 root ambu ke non morivano mai e poche righe x abbattere 600 iwa ninja...che dice tutto! |