Amazing. Such a good ending for a great fic. Im glad I was able to be apart of this journey as a reader.

So did she say yes lol

It's been a long journey, but this journey has come to an end. You took us on an adventure. Showed us a possible side to Naruto that we'd think impossible. Smart to dangerous levels. Cold. And manipulative. Yet still caring in his own way. It was good to see 'Naruto' return near the end though. Great job. Well done.

So who exactly did he end up with? This chapter seems very very muddled with not real ending. I'm I missing something?

interesting chapter.
lot of numbers and policy (ruling UN is really expensive)
look like relationship with miyuki and kurotsuchi become better

Prank on Neji for the win!

Man I love all of your Stories, All are soooo unique. There isn't a lot to complain about, in either of your stories :)

One thing bothers me though and that is the pairing in this story. Now don't be afraid: this won't be a stupid "you suck as a author because you made the pairing wrong" - review but completely rational.
Personally I can read everything: Multipairings, Harems, Yuri, Yaoi. No problem. What is important though is the build-up for the pairing(s).
Now to this story: You have this awesome build-up with Miyuki: Bonding, Sharing secrets, wishes, desires, and finally love. This goes on for like 10 chapters (didn't count just for this review) until they actually "start" something akin to a relationship. Awesome writing, awesome personalities and awesome build-up. Then you added Yugito suddenly in the mix. Nothing wrong with that. The problem is that the build-up for Yugi/Naru is short. Really short. Not a whole chapter and a lot of it was a fight.

Now this is a situation that should be avoided in future stories (I hope you write future stories :)). This isn't what the reader wants to read. Not because the reader dislikes Naru/Yugi or Multipairings in general but because you made us emotionally invested towards Miyuki/Naru with their awesome build-up. While the readers just don't feel anything for Yugi/Naru (or Naru/Mei, not sure what your plan for Mei is, but her character got even less showtime outside of her "job" than Yugito) because Naruto and her had one talk and 20 chapters later they're suddenly in a relationship which started "offscreen".

It's obvious, if people read your AN's, that you had a lot changes of mind how exactly Narutos lovelife will play out. When/if you write a next story this is something you should decide before you start writing the actual story. And if you do it in the spur of the moment then stick to it. Stick to the awesome written pairing. If you want to add another pairing show the reader why the second pairing is important to Naruto, so we can grow to like the second pairing too.

Hopefully you are not to angry with me for this rant. I hope this doesn't look like a flame because it honestly isn't meant to be one.
I love all your stories and am an avid reader.

PS: I'm sorry for spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I'm not a native speaker

your stories are awsome

Konan mei karui Karin or temari

I personally think that in stories like this especially Naruto should keep on using his mothers name and father more so mothers then the father name

I think Naruto if he had proper food from where you started and teacher hr would be close at or taller than the toad sennin and would be close to madaras power easy because lets compare sasuke had good food so of course he is taller Naruto had instant ramen noodles of course he is short sasuke didn't have lazy lazy teachers teaching him next to nothing Naruto did and look where that got him almost the same height at age 16 and just as strong as sasuke without a over zealous teacher

Hey, that chapter was good. I liked this one as well. I know something may be lurking around, even if things seem slow right now. And the revelation of Nagato's eyes being part of Naruto now was spectacular.

I think the conversation with Kurotsuchi went well. I hope she will continue on the path Naruto foresee's.

And I'm glad Tsunade can finally see why Naruto is doing what he is doing. And how he justified his dream to the Academy Class was eloquently put.

Oh Temari, so resistant, but you will fall for his charms sooner or later!

Great chapters and glad to see Naruto will have a happy ending. Can't wait for the next one; please keep it up.

You have good stories but your Naruto is always the same in each of them. Lost and emotionally disturbed... If you could try something new next time that would be great. Good job on all of them though.

fun chapter.
when miyuki willforgive naru?