you say it's chapter 22 at the end, which is somewhat odd ..
overall the chapter is as amazing as the others, you messed up naruto's relations to some extent, but it keeps the story interesting ..
Can't wait for the next chapters ..

wow, hands down this is my favorite fan fic, ive read quite a few of these and seem some pretty good ones but this is awesome, battle scenes were well detailed, as well as romance and conversation. the plot itself is nothing to sneeze at either, im eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

the only way for Naruto to even out Juubi and Sasuke is to inplant Itachi's Mangekyo or Shisui's eyes.

Mmm?
So It be naruto x miyuki as a pairing or it will harem?

A little bit confused in here...

And thanks for the new chapter

Cool deal. Hope to read more soon

Poorr Koyuki-chan

The plot and characterization have become rather messed up in this story by now. I am really not sure where you are taking this story to?Or will it a have a satisfying ending?

In any case the story has become rather boring and I have lost my interest in it.

The reasons are a drab plot which seems to drag on, late updates and one dimensional nature of narutos character.

interesting chapter.
sasuke joined juubi, danzo is dead and naruto is on bad terms with konoha.
finally naruto and miyuki have officially relationship.

Thanks for the update.
Naruto said a lot of words; I can agree that Kohona is rotten.

Never mind I skipped to the latest chapter just to make sure.

Read a few paragraphs and read a few from before to make sure it's really not me exaggerating and gotta say, you have mad plot skills with Sasuke and naruto even developed a sense of humor!

Are you a different person or did you improve over 9000?

I'd continue where I left off - but maan what a drag.
The difference in quality is astounding.

It's been a month or two that i stopped reading at this chapter of last chapter. So it's either that was the latest chapter you wrote during that time, or I got bored quickly..

Regardless, I'm surprised you updated today of all days and after a very long hiatus so lemme just state honestly what I think.

If I did get bored, reasons are likely-

Naruto hardly talks and gives one word answer to comrades. He makes me depressed.
It could also be because I dislike harem or generally a girl who suddenly likes a hot stranger (kinda like Karin suddenly liking Sasuke in canon.)
These are SMALL matters, in my opinion they won't stop me from reading If there is an amazing plot that keeps me glued. I'd consider naruto a different entity and continue reading just to see what happens next. If all you come up with are stale events or fanservice filler quantity or just super long detail jutsu fights, imma move on to another story.

So yeah, plot development.

Of course my memory of this is fuzzy so I might have some things wrong and I only read 5 chapters. I don't yet know what you did in later chapters.

I have read both this and Uchiha Naruto: the sage this review applies to both of them. Your stories are decent so far as plot lines go. What your stories fall short on is actual character development. Naruto in both of your stories has about as much emotional depth as a brick. I am not saying do cannon Naruto where he wears orange and is addicted to ramen. But when he is not kicking ass and taking names he should lighten up a little. I understand killing his emotions during battles. Your Naruto acts like a love child of Sai and Sasuke all the time, both in battle or outside of battle. Emotionally dead, brooding and emo for no reason.

Great chapter!

I totally believe that beating Naruto took from tsunade was a waste.. Personally i like "uchiha naruto the sage " Naruto's attitude more and other story's Naruto more than this... It's some time he'll be cool and stuff then suddenly he's like canon self. I fucking hate canon Naruto that's why i opted for fanfiction... But even then people may like this more(and also the reason i may not like love, emotions may or may not be because i lost my gf to my best friend and i may or may not have started hating love... Plz forgive me if i have offended you )M

Naruto should implant shisui eyes