More "round and round" with Danzo, and no one just says "enough, let's just kill him and be done with it."

That whole plotline just feels SOOOOOOO dragged out.

good chapter.
i like miyuki/naruto relationship

Great as always and was hoping that something between Naruto and Miyuki would happen.

Ok so no Juubi Jr.
Does Juubi have complete control of each piece of the bijuu he holds? And could the other jinchuriki possibly take the energy of their respective bijuu from him like Naruto did to Sora?

Rob, though I read both of your stories, this is my favorite by far! This Naruto is the character I like the most of the two, his improvement was not only astounding but included his thinking process. He is a true shinobi and hasn't closed his heart to others.

Juubi is a worthy villain and will push Naruto to new heights of power. He is threatening his village and from Naruto's standpoint without motives. No matter the end results of this attack, this will push Naruto to focus efforts on finding and destroying this monster. When Orochimaru can't or won't do anything about a shinobi, that alone is an endorsement of his prowess. What a mistake the snake face made in creating him. Not to mention the fact Orochimaru has the "perfect body" now, Konoha in this story better improve or it will be destroyed. It's time for the entire shinobi forces within the village to take their training and responsibilities more seriously because play time is over!

Thanks

DB

most people are the typical: \I don't like the villain/ type of person because :he's bad:

but I find him pretty badass, like a mix of itachi and Orochimaru in one

where is he power wise? ( - means equal power beings)
Kisame
Kakashi - Obito
Yugito
Tsunade - Mei - Onoki - A - Gaara - Killer Bee - Han - 5 tails - 7 tails jinchuriki
Orochimaru
Itachi
Hiruzen
Jiraiya
Minato
Pein/Pain
Nagato
Izuna
Tobirama
1 Tail - 2 Tails - 3 Tails - 4 Tails - 5 Tails - 6 Tails - 7 Tails - 8 Tails - 9 Tails
Hashirama - Madara
Kami - Death God - Juubi

The story concept is awesome. You just need a proof reader for some of your grammatical and spelling errors. Other than that though, I like where you are going.

THAT was a great chapter. The ending especially.

Another good chapter, but I do not really like the Juubi character so far, looking forward too the next chapter.

Juubi's partner is probably Zetsu, he might have survived the battle between Nagato and Obito. Danzo by now knows that he's weapon is beyond control and targeting Konoha.

Brilliant

Another sucky birthday for Naruto

This should be interesting. Almost like the Pein attack, but different. A lot different. Great chapter!

wow, juubi look really strong like a anti-sue.

still on a fence about this 'Juubi' character, but this is still entertaining and i'm looking forward to more.