Reviews for Namikaze Naruto: The Peace Seeker |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry to say but this Story now goes in the quality of Boruto. A superpowerful Villain out of nowhere who only can be defeated by multiple strong Shinobi. It's cliche and trash if it really goes this way if not it could become good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sadly it didn't turn out that good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bro is orochimaru how is laughing sooo much |
![]() ![]() Naruto x oc? Zzzzzzzz |
![]() ![]() ![]() so just gonna leave Kurama behind the cage like the supposed burden he is those 3 years could've been used to also form a friendship after all naruto basically treating him like how he being treated |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good story ! ! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Hiraishin doesn't cause a yellow flash, it looks instantaneous with no colour. Minato was just nicknamed the yellow flash because of his hair colour and his speed/teleportation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does Naruto now talk like a robot? |
![]() ![]() I’ve only read the first couple chapters, but I have a big issue with the dialogue. Technically, it’s perfect and we’ll written, but for a dialogue it’s really bad. No one speaks that perfectly, especially naruto. No matter how sad he is, he’ll never say “moreover” lol. He’s a kid, he speaks like a kid, but the way you have them speaking, it’s too formal. The story is written like an essay, and has no heart into it. Still like the story tho, :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was a complete disappointment-Writing quality dropped by tenfold. Seriously, you are a great author and there are clear improvements over different fics of yours, but this chapter was so, so bad. |
![]() ![]() It seems like you are making dude obsessed with peace |
![]() ![]() Man why make an oc character like the story is fine without it |
![]() ![]() ![]() As bad as it is that you drastically changed this world by destroying the Akatsuki before the story even started, I think this Danzo/Orochimaru subplot is when worse. Oh, by the way, please correct your spelling of Danzo. Throughout the fic you spelled it as “Danzou” |
![]() ![]() ![]() “I quit ANBU and returned to serving Konoha as jounin.” Kakashi is such a liar. He did not “quit” ANBU. He was forced to leave ANBU, effectively fired by Hiruzen. He made him become a Jonin-sensei. He also believed Kakashi spent too much time in the dark and needed to spend his life in the light. |