story premise and flow is good but naruto's character is very bland he lacks vibrancy which makes him who he is.

I love Itachi
I hope you develop their relationship

Brilliant

You know in order for Naruto to go after this peace he wants, he's gonna have to be hella strong. Like stupid strong. But you already know this, so I'm curious. What'll be the great obstacle, the immovable object to bring about the unstoppable force that Naruto will have to be?

Stop mentioning yellow flash, Flying thunder god technique is a space-time just, there's no yellow flashes involved. People called Minato the Yellow Flash because they catch sight of his hair before he disappears. This video shows what it looks like watch?vphFLvu3o0Xg. and this video watch?v6nF3nIrojc4 shows what it might've look in real life lol

sorry, but... his right arm, puts him on another level.

Well written and really intresting

Instead of Naruto giving the money to the guy trying to get Temari, why not just give it to Gaara so Gaara can say "yeah right, jog on"

Update soon please

i hope for pairing is naruto x mei

good chapter.
who are those ennemies in the shadows?

I was wondering why didn't you just put Shikamaru with Temari? Since it is cannon now. Or did you want a range of possibilities for a pairing.

Woo i like temari, wonder what role iwa have in this story

nice

great story! just wish people would put what kind of pairing in the summary.

good chap