Reviews for Namikaze Naruto: The Peace Seeker
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
Lol
SinfulPride chapter 2 . 7/11/2018
I really like the premise, but i had to stop reading because of the writing. The story has great ideas, but practically every third sentence is a repeat of something already said.
STARFIREPUDDING chapter 7 . 7/1/2018
what 'thing' do you speak of Naru-chan?
I don't understand.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/4/2018
that description of kissing was spot on
Shadow Eminence chapter 8 . 5/1/2018
dude one thing's for sure, naruto is never the type to get this fucking emotionless freak and u just made that and fucked it
Ma'ar'el chapter 32 . 4/5/2018
I liked the story alot.
PastelMuffins chapter 10 . 2/16/2018
WTH!? IS OROCHIMARU HIGH?!
PastelMuffins chapter 10 . 2/16/2018
Poor Kisame...
lucasrosa94 chapter 7 . 12/4/2017
muito bom.
AzvenusKestel chapter 13 . 11/26/2017
Dude if you think leaving loose links in the chapter is awesome go read some books. You need it. You have left a lot of important conversation hanging like that and your story is starting to sound like a break dance being performed like a hooligan.
afdsf chapter 4 . 11/10/2017
the Raijin no Ken is not a normal sword like you describe it is only a hilt that could creat a electric blade when chakra was channeled into it.
gunghoun chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
You should work on reducing word repetition in your writing. In one paragraph, you repeated the word "shuriken" 7 times, which is clunky and pulls the reader out of your work faster than you'd expect.
Gold Testament chapter 4 . 9/15/2017
Can't wait for Kakashi's humbling.
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Yeah Jiraiya's not the bet with good impressions.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/12/2017
I don't get why writers of naruto fanfiction write in English but don't say jutsu in English makes absolutely no sense
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