gah.. cliff hanger... lol loving your style and story.. please don't stop now. ciao til next time

Good stuff.

Traitor troopers take down teens, but Purity pauses at pot-shotting pubescents! So suspenseful! :)

Seriously, I love this. Well done.

Meh. Not really buying Taylor triggering like that with the changed circumstances. She triggered in canon due to being utterly alone and abandoned, but here she still has her bestie. I also don't believe Sophia being Queen Bee. She's too mean, too self-centered. Without Emma she'd have maybe two friends on the track team and nobody else would talk to her.

As setups go, this one has too many SOD-breakers to really fly for me.

We found the PRT rogue troopers, and Purity didn't want a kill order on her. Unfortunately, the bloodthirsty rogues want to keep their advantage, and that could give the Samaritans a chance to take back that edge.

Great to see this fic back up and kicking, I was getting worried for a bit, all the pots boiling except one on the back burner :D

parking lot. This is bizzaro America but still America.

Damn despite their best efforts seems the bay wants some form a fight to happen anyway.

So... Fanfic finally got an email laxative and my inbox was flooded from great height with three pages of story notifications...

Guess what I chose to read first! :D

I'm surprised I missed this on the previous chapter when I first read it last year. So, James' company name... I would have expected a Synonym for 'Final'... something like 'Ultimate Solutions' or the like...

oh shit. did Kayden just decide that now was the perfect time to switch sides?

damn im rooting for that.

Well done!

After this battle, the Empire will be kaput!

Hopefully the Samaritans will get another member, if things go down as they seem to be.

So this'll be the point where Kayden's mom instincts grab all her fears and take them out back to be shot.

I'm kind of hoping that Purity fries those two moles and I'm sure that mole ashes are the culinary opposite of molasses.

I think the E88 is just about "stick a fork in it" done. Once this is wrapped up, I wonder if either The Elite, The Adepts, or the Ambassadors will make an appearance in Brockton Bay.

I know they took out the Merchants, ABB, and S9, not sure if they've taken out The Teeth and neutralizing Butcher 13 will be very, very tricky.

In any case, it was a great update and I look forward to the next. Thanks for the early update.

Not quite a cliffhanger ending but it certainly ended on a sour note.

Looks like they'll have to admit they were behind the capture and that the E88 is now planning a major assault to get their captured members back. I doubt that Piggot will let them BS her about how they found out about the assault.

I look forward to the conclusion of this arc and thanks for the update.

PS: until I looked up approbation to see if there was a reason you used it in place of affirmation. I can see why an egotistical lout like Max would consider the agreement to be approbation.

Awesome fic!

Fantastic action!