Reviews for When Revenge Backfires
AloneInThisWorld chapter 28 . 2/2
Really good story loved, every moment of it. Never stop writing!
smackthewarptots chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Whenever I write a review I always try to talk about both the positive and the negative. I'll start with the positive. This story is entertaining and interesting, and for being as young as you are it's well written. I thought it was funny and at tines witty. I enjoyed the scenes where Garfield was actually nice to Raven the most, and those interactions are what kept me reading as far as I did. As for the negative, I felt both Raven and Garfield were drastically OOC, and it was very hard for me to look past. Being a longtime fan of both the show and the comics makes it harder for me to read fics where they act so OOC, as I find it distracting. I felt that for how badly Garfield tortured Raven it didn't make any sense for her to ever trust or like him. Also, the drama seemed like something that would only happen between 13 year old kids and any logical supervision from adults was seriously lacking, especially for a school sanctioned summer camp. If a student pulled a knife on another student there is no way she wouldn't be sent home at the very least (and have the knife confiscated, surely). I believe you have a lot of potential as a writer and strongly encourage you to continue. I know, for me, I love to get constructive feedback so I can learn and grow as a writer, and I hope you do too. Good luck on your future fics :)
loverfanficsgirl1 chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
write a sequel. yes this story is just too good. Its a great story, please dont ruin the fun! And you know that cliche saying 'all good things must come to an end'? fuck that, this shouldnt be it! come on plzzzz!

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loverfanficsgirl1 chapter 22 . 11/23/2014
omg! chapter! Fiona fuck a lot is a good one.
Yup raven's big mistake ever!my mouth is still open...
good chapter. great chapter!
SaintMichael95 chapter 28 . 10/24/2014
You didn't apologize for not having a lemon in it... sniff sniff
F.A.Y.B.A.N chapter 22 . 9/13/2014
Uh oh...
F.A.Y.B.A.N chapter 21 . 9/13/2014
moneys in gar
F.A.Y.B.A.N chapter 20 . 9/13/2014
tehe i like Jen
F.A.Y.B.A.N chapter 13 . 9/13/2014
so.. ... taras pregnant Machiors with baby AND cheating on gar
leena1445 chapter 28 . 8/28/2014
Good chapter! I loved it even though Rae was OOC! :D
dj25taz chapter 28 . 8/28/2014
Yay loved it
gogurl chapter 28 . 8/28/2014
This was one of the best story I read in my life. Thank you for making this wonderful story!
JasonVUK chapter 28 . 8/28/2014
:D This is an overall great chapter _ I really loved it!

Tara is still a bitch, Rachel and Garfield should call up the show and tell them how it happened :I

X3 it was a cute ending not crap! :D
Kaarlinaa chapter 28 . 8/28/2014
Wait hopefully that wasent te end of the story. lol what if the teacher just left lol? But the best part was bb n Rae fluff continue more bb n rae
XandrColdhearted chapter 28 . 8/27/2014
Grammatical errors? Long updates? CRAPPY ENDING?
Whaaaat? This was perfect! Thank you sooo much! Ily!
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