Reviews for Naruto: The Gamer
Guest chapter 17 . 6/23
Guest this won't be continued anymore it's been too long since it's last update
lolo nade chapter 12 . 5/28
I wouldn't mind once seeing a fic where the fox took over the body, I think it'll be more interesting if done right
thegrison chapter 17 . 5/16
I see a few things wrong. Why is Naruto not mad at the Third for LYING to him about the fox, his clan and parents his whole life? I would be beyond mad. He has asked why people hate him and about his parents possibly over a hundred times by that point. Yet Third always told him I don't know. Even worse is when he asked why he was picked for the fox it was I don't know. Let us also remember when asked about his clan then Third said that was why 4th picked him another lie. I would have Zero trust in Third after that.
benjamin chapter 17 . 5/5
no olvides esta historia tiene una gran creatividad e interes para los lectores continuala
Guest chapter 2 . 3/3
But naruto wasn’t really socially inept he just acted like any child who’s been treated like shit from day 1 would. Anything to get acknowledged and almost everyone who just gave him the time of day ended up loving him.
GinHanelle chapter 17 . 1/25
Thank you, even though it's not finished. Favorite thing about this one is that Naruto doesn't tell anyone about his abilities. Quite sick of him doing that in fics so this was a nice change.
Best of luck in your current goals
Guest chapter 4 . 1/24
Neji wouldn't have cared about who his team mates hung out with because in his mind, he's better than them. Having Neji threaten Tenten is out of his character based on anime that is. If anything, he'll simply say something along the lines of losers sticking with other losers. Also, your logic makes no sense for tenten being around naruto. Her spending time with naruto would not affect the hyuga unless she was a hyuga member herself which she isn't. If anything, spending time with Naruto would increase her chances of being an outcast.
Chikeninacoop chapter 10 . 12/26/2017
I think the dating tenten part was rushed. should have happened at the end of chunin exams or something. good story doe
Guest chapter 8 . 12/22/2017
&laughing* YEEEES
Guest chapter 6 . 12/22/2017
A moment of silence. ... Thank you. I adore their relationship. I like the silver (not gray, SILVER *smirk*) symbol. Just yes.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/22/2017
A few spelling errors (her when it should've been he and vice versa) but other than that I liked this chapter. I ship it. Yuki-sensei's the best. :-)
Guest chapter 4 . 12/22/2017
Go such on an egg, choke on it, injest it, and become the bearer of Orochimaru's spawn, you digusting excuse of an existence, Neji. ~Here comes the bride~
Guest chapter 3 . 12/22/2017
YES! Tenten has character! *Sniffs* Author, I'm so proud! YOUR YOUTH SHINES BRIGHTLY; YOUR FLAMES SURELY MUST BE SEEN MILES AWAY! YOSH! I love this friendship; it is adorable. It feels natural, and I greedily want more. Hehhehheh...MUAHAHAHAHAHAHWAAAAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA! :-)
Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2017
No freak outs from being a member of a clan? ...technically TWO clans? Seriously, where's the Namikaze clan perk? It automatically became a clan when Minato became Hokage, and he totally inherented Minato's quick thinking in battle (though recklessness is his first go-to usually). I mean, yeah he has Gamer's mind and that kinda negates that...but shouldn't it be addressed? If not, there could always be a 'sealing comes naturally perk'. Yes, I understand his mind is whirling, but sooner or later we need a reaction. Also, what is up with that luck? Like there could be a flaw where it's at random chance in the village, but that flaw goes away once he exits etc...? Other than all that I felt as if you answered most and handled this concept well.
Pika5490 chapter 7 . 11/4/2017
phase, not faze.
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