Reviews for A Snowflake in Spring
Person of no interest chapter 28 . 1/5
First off I would like to wish you a (very late) happy Christmas and New year!
I'm glad to see that Anna took Rapunzle's advice to heart and has set some ground rules for her and Elsa.I'm mean, I'm kinda sad they won't be kissing and stuff anymore but building a healthy relationship takes precedence! I feel it shows great maturity on Anna's part that she is willing to make sure Elsa is better before progressing too far. It's a shame that nothing can be done for Hans but it doesn't seem like he really wants to be helped(I am by no means an expert on mental health and how it works). With how this chapter ended he's likely to be in a coma if he managed to survive the fall...neither outcome is going to be easy for Anna to deal with.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4
This story is amazing! Thank-you so much for all of the dedication and work that you have put into creating this masterpiece. Xxxxxxx
IncestIsWincest chapter 28 . 1/4
Best. Christmas present. Ever.
Mozart's Starling chapter 28 . 1/4
Dayum. Yes. Back to the old grind eh? Good to have you back.
Heine chapter 28 . 1/4
Yaaaaaaaayyyy! The update is here! Wooohooo! Thank you for creating such a lovely story for this kawaii pairing! Absolutely love it! Can't wait for more of this awesomness keep it up!
crazyla chapter 28 . 1/4
This was an interesting chapter, I was so happy when Anna and Elsa talked about their future...
But the end of the chapter is by far the most intriguing part.
At first I naturally thought that Elsa somehow managed to push off Hans and he accidentally fell down the stairs, but then, as I was trying to imagine what will happen after this, with Anna being devasted and what people may assume happened I had another thought...
Hans just said he's rather be dead than seeing Elsa and Anna together, so... what if he threw himself down the stairs? What if this is just his plan to make Elsa lose her visitation rights AND make Anna hate her? Elsa really isn't that strong physically after all and she cannot speak up to defend herself; furthermore, the only witness is Gerda that only saw Hans yelling nonsense (assuming Gerda will be alright to testify to that much).
Granted, Hans didn't seem lucid anough to come up with such a plan, but I've learned not to underestimate him.
In any case I sense angst coming...
I hope you'll find enough free time and motivation to update soon, 'bye 'till then.
RR chapter 28 . 1/4
I don't know about you, but Hans certainly looked dead. At least Gerda will e able to say Hans was being his creepy psycho self... even if what happened after will be a mystery. Poor, poor Anna...
JSze44 chapter 28 . 1/3
Hooooooly crap. My heart was hammering the entire end of the chapter. I totally thought ASIS was done but I'm so glad you're back! I hate Hans and I'm glad he's dead, but I fear for Anna and Elsa's relationship now...perfect chapter Cel:)
Kio chapter 28 . 1/3
HOLY GAAAAAAAAAAAD

ELSAAAAAA
YOUR VOOOOIOOOICE
BUT WHYYYYY
AHHHHHHHH

Is he dead?! Is heded?!

/I knew you wouldn't leave us forever, Cel/
/I love your story, the world you crafted, and all your characters more than you could know/

I found a few typos for you:
stared at dumbly

A jolt when up her
Kio chapter 28 . 1/3
HOLY FAAAAAAAAAAACK

ELSAAAAAA
YOUR VOOOOIOOOICE
BUT WHYYYYY
AHHHHHHHH

Is he dead?! Is heded?!

/I knew you wouldn't leave us forever, Cel/
/I love your story, the world you crafted, and all your characters more than you could know/

I found a few typos for you:
stared at dumbly

A jolt when up her
x.MyrtenasterRose.x chapter 28 . 1/3
WHAT. THE. FUCK. CEL?!

OF ALL POSSIBLE CLIFFHANGERS YOU CHOOSE THAT ONE?!

*dies*

*said from beyond the grave* Awesome chapter; keep up the good work!

~SnZ
Kung-fu Blaziken chapter 28 . 1/3
You make us wait all this time...
You give us a beautiful scene between Anna and Elsa...
And then you end it like that...
YOU'RE THE DEVIL.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
0 to 100 n***a real quick
Guest chapter 28 . 1/1
totally didn't expect that, keep going, me and my friends love this
Mistique Four chapter 28 . 1/1
Glad to have you back with another chapter. I was beginning to wonder if you were dead ;) or just gave up on the story.
This was a rather intense chapter too. I'm glad that Elsa knows Anna loves her in the same way that she does her. But the sensibility to want the both of them to be out of there is understandable, yet probably really difficult too.
And then Hans had to go and ruin such a good vibe and probably mess Elsa up even more. Although I doubt Hans is dead, he must be seriously hurt (well I was gonna say damaged, but that could be explained more ways then the physical one I'm trying to convey). Although I do wonder why he picked that moment to try and kill Elsa. Well he certainly shot any hope of seeing Anna anytime soon... unless, I mean he is probably gonna end up "hospitalized" and perhaps Anna need to give permission on some meds or something. I don't know.
But I do foresee that Elsa is going to get blamed/framed for defending herself and Hans claiming she did it without being provoked. Ah, but Elsa can write her defense. And then there's Gerda, who can claim being attacked by Hans. Although I doubt that'll stop Hans from trying.
Poor Elsa though. I think that she believes right now that she killed Hans. I fear that any progress she's made thanks to Anna will be undone thanks to this. And poor Anna too. She always saw the good in Hans. She'll feel so betrayed and hurt.
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