Beautiful story. Loved the emotional eide.

10/10

I don't even know how to express how much I loved this story. I'm a sobbing mess right now, and I can't help grinning like an idiot. This story of yours is one of those I never get tired of, that makes you feel so strongly that you just can't stop reading until you're at the end, and that you dearly miss afterwards (enough to make you read it over and over again everytime your think about it). Thank you so much for sharing it on FF!
I'm so glad I started reading stuff written in English a few years ago. I don't why, but I always feel things more easily and vividly when reading English. I still like French (my native language), but the more I get used to English, the more I love it.
I wish you a lovely day. :)

Woah! This story was amazing and has left some sort of weird warm feeling inside me. Well, that or I'm super hungry. I don't really know anymore.

Dark (or Dane, I suppose) was awesome and I love how even Link got a girl at the end. I...:D It's great!

*sings Let It Go loudly, except it's the rock version* YEH! *doing all the hand actions and everything*

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*sing ends* Awwwwww...*clicks replay* w *dances and sings some more*

What.
The.
Heck?!

That final comment about Girls being special? *laughs* Wow. I...wow. Ok. On to the next chapter.

Not a trap, Link. More an...'All Dark Creations Anonymous' Meeting. w

Dark was a person before all this? Called Dane? Hmmmmmmm...*thinks* That's kinda cool. Poor kid though, to be transformed like that. V.V I feel for him.

Anyway, glad Link cares about Darky. It's like...perhaps Link sees some Light inside Dark Link. w Or I'm just dreaming.

I was gonna say something...now it's gone. Dangit.

Ah well. Dark is cute, and-! OH YEAH! I remember now! w Yay!

Well, if the snow girl needs a name, I suggest Yuki (meaning snow) or Estrella (means Star, I think) or Tsu (no idea). Anyway, Yuki (kinda like the Yuki-onna) is a pretty name.

So...hmm, what else to say? Well, Dark (should I call him Dark or Shadow...hmmm...I'll stick with Dark) being all murderous is cool, but saying he's lonely...AWWW!

"Strip. You're freezing."
"You're gay?"

Best. Lies. Ever.

Also, I love the way Dark is portrayed (is it all right if I call him that?). He's like, annoyed, but they're both nice enough that they're willing to look each other in the face. Better than killing each other, anyway. *shrugs* The fighting might warm them up though.

I'm sad to hear that you'll be gone for a while, but I wish you luck on publishing your novel. If it's anything like the fanfiction you write on here, I'm sure it'll be awesome! Definitely let us know WHEN you do publish something because I would definitely be interested in reading it. Good Luck!

Well, I think the pacing was lovely. No need for months of suffering...and you did have lots of flashbacks, so it's not like the story didn't span a long period of time. Anywho...loved it! Adding it to my favorite list, along with Opal and Luminescence. :-)

Ahhhhhh! I loved that ending! Oh, it just wrapped everything up so nicely and I totally didn't see Nani being Dane's sister. That one blind-sided me. I can't get over how awesome this was! I love how Kane was all criticizing the length of the story at the end, and no, I think this story was the perfect length. I didn't even realize they'd only been there for a week! I thought it was longer. Great story and I can't wait till something else of yours catches my eye and draws me back for more. Bravo! *claps hands exuberantly* Bravo!

I have read this story and your other one "Luminescence". I really enjoyed them both, but I have to know: do you really like character deaths or something? Anyway, you write beautifully and I love your plots and your "poops". Keep writing. :)

some one has watched frozen :)