love the story so far please keep up the great work i look forward to reading more chapters soon please post more soon! keep on writing a great story!

Great job on this interesting chapter!

Didn't feel like a segue to me at least. I thought this was moving things along nicely. Introduced Garrus as a party member and moved the plot along. Don't need huge fights every time to keep things interesting.
Love your writing please continue bringing your tale to all of us out here. ciao

You might want to check out "American Wuxia" by Miklagaard. It's a Ranma in MCU... but it has some pretty nifty look at the Art, in pseudo-science sort of way, with a little bit of philosophy...

Pretty good stuff. Might give you more ideas on how to elevate your Ranma centric fic...specifically on ways for Ranma's growth in the Art.

Thanks for the excellent chapter!

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Good chapter

the hard part isnt the slower pace in general of the story, its the slow progress with tali getting to take off that suit...

this chap sas really good even with no beta reading, no spelling mistakes more like words used in improper context names not correct etc, but ht were very infrequent so still really didnt break the immersion. also as a bit of a romantic, the relationship between ranma and tali is so good!

Just a quick note. Usagi was left behind looking after the other Asari in chapter 12 and shouldn't be with Herb and Wrex at this point.

i do look forward to what will happen to the council as both its current iteration and as an institution

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hehehegeg "The head of the STD group"

You can get an external CD/DVD player to plug into your computer, it's what I had to do with my new gaming laptop. I got a really nice one that can burn blu-rays for $70. Gonna install Civ3 complete on it now that I can. You also might want to check gog dot com for old games to download on your current PC.

That said, it amuses me that Ranma is having a slow-burn romance with a young woman who shot him. "It was love at first shot!" LOL

I look forward to the upcoming plot butterflies since the fecal matter is hitting the air circular much sooner than in canon game. I've never played it because I discovered, back in the 90's that I have the reflexes of a tree sloth so action games aren't for me.

Thanks for the update.

Just a FYI but I bought ME on cd too and it tied in to my steam account. So, if you have it, look at the cd key if you still have that too and try to use that to activate the game in your steam library. Also, the game is on sale regularly. That said, I would advise buying the legendary edition. All three games in one convenient package.