Reviews for The Effect of a Horse and a Dragon
Please read me chapter 3 . 3/4
I have an idea for a self insert alternate history fiction thingy someone travels back in time with extremely advanced technology they eventually get to extremely high hyper Tech then they decide to travel Dimensions they going to the Mass Effect dimension they study everything then they go back in time in that dimension they replace the technology cache in Mars then they go to the croghan's Homeworld and start subtly giving them ideas of Honor respect compassion something something similar thing that was done to the samurai Yes except it's more King Arthur type of scenario or a combination between all three things mixed together anyway and then they go over to forgot the name the lizard race and they set things in motion to protect each of those races from being interfered with before they are ready each place is given an artificial Moon since none of the places had a moon before now they do and that moon seems to always redirect everyone so those bug people won't come by any of those places nor does the asari and those two people get to develop and be watched and analyzed partially science partially historic thing and partially like as if they got a scientific doctorate and the things that Crocodile Dundee does yes I'm old but what I'm trying to say is that they study the planet their culture of their behaviors everything on both of the places and they have special crystals planted in specific places that will project images that will guide them from being less more like and more like owner bound Warriors anything that a part of the culture emphasizes the positive traits and tells them about the great Calamity that destroyed their race that they were forced to receive the Galaxy blah blah blah so both the lizard people and the Crogan get a secret cabal in the background making sure the people are strong honorable and spiritual yeah all those things that way everyone develops as effectively as they can then Humanity comes to the scene but this time they have a whole entire different technology and thanks to an AI almost exactly like replicating everything that they do or will do if the technology they literally give the humanity like almost like watching everything that they will do and pointing out all the problems as soon as Shepherd shows on this scene he's going to be a pivotal point for some part reason the universe wants him to be the hero so make sure whatever his name is Shepherd f****** gets the training and skill and as many different fields as possible and hopefully Shepherd will live through this and teach the Next Generation to be just as badass but remember I'm summing up I'm not saying exactly what they're going to say I'm summing up like 200 chapters worth of material and then these species that did all of this your si sent down cloaked phased multi-directional cameras to record everything.
Please read me chapter 2 . 3/4
The Dragon King is The Reincarnation of gigamesh and Rama's is the Reincarnation of his friend.
mongodatroll chapter 5 . 1/16
I held off on reading this one for quite a while just because it seemed abandoned. Now that I have read through it, I kind of understand some of your problems though I do wish you'd continue the thing. Of course, I could also wish you hadn't included Herb, but that's my personal preference. Not a slight on your writing which as usual is very good. Take care!
GuestD chapter 5 . 10/3/2022
Hey again please the thoughts of what’s to come are killing me I must know what happens next has anything given you a muse to continue this story my answers need to be answered also how old will herd and ranma be into this universe also will anyone from NWC be appearing. Maybe show a chapter of what has happened so far back where ranma and herd were before the spell. will ryoga being appearing due to his family curse taking action and have him somehow appear in ME universe near or in front of ranma. I must know so hurry soon with the chapters!
KumaNoIkari chapter 5 . 8/7/2022
Any chance you up for a chapter 6?
khatre chapter 5 . 7/9/2022
I know its been a while but this story is FUN.
thank you
allanreimer chapter 2 . 6/2/2022
I usually enjoy your work, but you seem to return to one funny error of typing... 'about five minutes before the frigate was due to land, Herb stood glaring at the younger marital artist from out of a large hood.' At this point, it could be argued that Ranma has taken the first steps to learn "marital arts" but I don't think that's what you meant here.
lexus4444 chapter 5 . 4/16/2022
While there are about 5 mistakes these 5 chapters. I really enjoyed this story so far.
GeorgeTobor chapter 5 . 4/11/2022
This reminds me of your Ranma/Star Wars fic.
Not a complaint, just an observation.

I hope you continue it eventually because I have enjoyed what you have written.

GeorgeTobor chapter 2 . 4/11/2022
read the timeline on the Mass Effect wiki.

Yes the ending leaves much to be desired...

Destroy the reapers is the best but it is to simple an end, it lacks imagination.
Control is enslavement and means eventual rebellion, stupid.
Combining is not bad, but not great either...

Better would have been somehow freeing and deprogramming all those the reapers had assimilated.

Best would be ... I'm not sure but the available endings are not it.
GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 4/10/2022
The only problem is I know nothing about Mass Effect.

You have time to put in explanations for people like me.

Good start.
K. M. Donovan chapter 5 . 2/27/2022
try Quartermass or mjimeyg, both have a good Harry Potter/Tali Mass Effect crossover.

personally, i am trying to find a good ME crossover with Harry/Ranma paired with Liara. Tali, while adorable, is becoming overdone as a pairing option. and NO ONE seems to even CONSIDER Liara as an option. they all seem to go "Nah, Liara is too Obvious a choice, lets do something different." and yet, by doing something "different" they all do the same thing. and that is usually choosing Tali.

so yeah, both the aforementioned authors have a decent Mass Effect crossover that has a Tali/Harry Potter pairing. maybe they will help with your muse.
joeyblast chapter 4 . 10/2/2021
Yesssss! Doctor Who for the win!
Quatermass chapter 4 . 5/29/2021
...Your onomatopoeia for the "Doctor Who" theme failed. Too many people try it and fail.
jhsilver123 chapter 5 . 5/18/2021
Any chance the new Mass Effect Legendary Edition rekindled your Muse?
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