Reviews for if the world ends
The Lady Nightingale chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
Wow. That... hurt. A lot.
I... That hurt and was perfect all at the same time.
I spent a lot of time watching and re-watching the scene where the guard comes, and I *think* he says 'My lord,' before 'The queen is dead'. Which is interesting. And I never thought about your 'who had remembered to think that he should be told'. I want to explore that further sometime. Loving your work.
Grac3 chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
Gosh, that hurt. Absolutely beautiful
Lovingthefantasy chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
All of your stories bring tears to my eyes! I love them!
Sumi Anzu chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
So much angst.
I very believe he was in similar turmoil in movie but not so extreme to
Point painting a potrait of his mother with his blood but realized the blood on his hand was his mother cuz he was blame for her death since he told kursed path out.

Ending with loki telling his illusion of frigga yes, i consider u as my mother. Alway regreting not doing soo when she asked.
CrackinAndProudOfIt chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Beautiful. You've captured Loki's emotions in such vivid, intense detail here; not only in his grief for Frigga, but also in his guilt, sense of failure, and ultimate self-loathing, you capture such crucial facets of his character. All of this is gorgeously written, and that wonderful, terrible image of Frigga's portrait in Loki's blood was chilling and so powerful.

Excellent work.
zoe alice chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Well. That was painful. It's always painful.
Twinchy chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Min, this is such a fabulous take on the terrible situation Loki found himself in upon receiving these news. It's all kinds of heartbreaking but very well written and convincing. *adds roaring applause*
Goblin Girl's Cast Members chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Wow... This is probably did happen to him...
Fangtastic story over all. And had enough emotion in it too.
Avatar Aang chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Awwwwwwwwwwww poor Loki xxxxx
helenxxx chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Very good I can feel the agony coming off the 'page' - what is fridging though?
Potkanka chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Why did I read it even as I knew what it was going to do to me? Poor Loki, poor Frigga... but I'm still living in denial - or more like, that it's not permanent. As you said, if others can be not!dead, why not her? It should be pretty easy to bring her back to life in million different ways and I wonder if I might eventually do it as well or simply never write anything post-TDW.
I'm very much looking forward to the fix-it fic, obviously. :)
Barranca chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
I liked it despite of everything. Loki's feelings are so raw, and it isn't going to get any better, just more faded as you said.
bluedancingkittykat chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Oh, crap. Right in the feels. Brought me to tears. *Sniffle*
Indigo-Night-Wisp chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Yeah, it's fine, don't worry about it.

It's not like I needed my lungs anyway.

Or my heart.

Or my sanity.

I like the way he looks when he's suffering too.

But I WILL be waiting on that fix-it-fic...
Zena Alexander chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
BEAUTIFULLY written. I absolutely love it when people capture Loki's ripped and most fragile of moments. Wonderful and painful to read all at the same time. Great work, keep going!
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