Absolutely love this chapter, especially the confession and the timing for it. The scene with lapras was really cute too

Poor little ash...

Love the last part about the pendant, such fluffly feelings!

I always love the idea of the whole gang together!

First fanfic in a while where the Arthur writes the TR Motto

OMG YOU PAIRED BROCK AND LUCY, YOU HAVE OFFICIALLY IMPRESSED ME 100X MORE NOW, I LOVE THAT PAIRING! EEEEEEEP THANK YOU! Also, bringing Leaf in for Gary? Yay, she's real in this story! Woot woot! Ah I loved this chapter :D I hope everyone's okay, though. Also, now so many more people know Ash can use aura. Isn't that bad?

Great chapter! Man you're really making good use of the "Ash's father left him" headcannon. Awesome. Also, since Mewtwo was already mentioned in the story I'm super hoping that they'll meet him in the cave like what happens in the games. That'd be so exciting!

I love how you're changing Paul. I'm relieved Torterra survived; I've read a fic before where his Torterra died and it was really upsetting. Also, I don't remember which chapter the Luvdisc thing happened in (it could have been this one, I really haven't a clue) but I loved that! Ash and Misty holding hands, Drew with his hand on May's, Dawn with her hand on Paul's shoulder, and Iris and Cilan bumping hands while doing the dishes... and best of all, Jessie and James at the exact same moment! I didn't see that coming, but I love it. They remind me a bit of Zuko. Not as badass, hot, or dangerous, but they've got that battle going on inside them and that potential to do good. Oh, and Brock's "why can't I find love" line? Classic!

Awesome, I loved this chapter. Great going with the time flower and the First Movie memories! And Ash and Misty's scenes were beautiful :)

Ahh now I know why the groups were split like that. This is gonna be a little weird with 10 guys and only 4 girls, since that means only 4 couples. Too bad. But I love poké, contest, ikari, and wishful, so if those are the pairings then I'm thrilled :D

awesome

Woohoo, I read this whole story in three days :D QUEENSPELLER67 this series to me, and before continuing to the next arc I'll review this one, because after all the work and time you put into this story you deserve a review ;) Well, what can I say... The plot seems very interesting, especially the darker bits, and maybe it'll turn out that the Master Challenge and the aura does seem to have a connection, but that's just a guess. While sometimes it's a bit, well, cliché, in the sense that everyone is paired up during the dance and that even Pikachu is going to get a girlfriend (feels a bit unnecessary to me) and that Ash is always the one to save the day while Misty gets angry and that so many Pokémon evolve, it's still a very fun story. And it helps a lot that I really do love the pairings you use/hint at in this story, I'm very much looking forward to the progression of those relationships :D I also like that you're trying to give everyone some new Pokémon and some screen time, which can't be easy with such a large cast.
Anyway, thank you for writing and finishing this (it's really awesome that you managed to finish such a huge story, you can be proud of yourself!), I'll go read the next arc now, and keep writing! !

Hey just wanted to say I am on my Fithian run-through of this story and it's as good now as it was when I starrted, so the author did a good job.

Srsly keep it up

-R.C.F

Those parts involving jealousy seem forced.

Their time in Rota is probably my favorite part of this book. Overall, I loved it! Only a few minor grammer errors, but other than that it was very well written! On to book two!