Reviews for Winter Girl
moonwatcher13 chapter 7 . 3/20
He would die.
moonwatcher13 chapter 6 . 3/20
Ok, NOW it got dark. Parents raping their own children, beating their wives to death because they need to be corrected. That is dark. Compared to those events, two sisters fucking seems like child's play in comparison. Since this whole thing is already done, I seriously hope that Anna doesn't get raped. That would be almost too much to handle.
moonwatcher13 chapter 5 . 3/20
This was slightly disturbing to read, so much that the first time i had to stop. I needed to go over it again, and process what was going on. It is pretty clear that on some level they realize how fucked up their relationship is becoming. The stress of keeping everything secret, of being related, their families disapproval and so many other things seems to be wrecking them both internally.

And at the same time, they both need each other more then ever. Because all Anna has right now is Elsa, and all Elsa has right now is Anna. They accept each other, including all the nasty destructive angry parts. And that's what makes this realistic. Because people will do insane, stupid things to have somebody care about them as much as these two care about each other. And if that support is ever taken away, death seems like a pleasant alternative to the pain of being without that person. Losing them feels like you have lost your reason to live, and a hollow life isn't a life at all.

This isn't too dark. Its fucked up, disturbing and painful. But it is not dark. Dark would be if they ever actually went through with their threat, or at least tried.

And is it weird that, disturbing level of co-dependence aside, i am completely ok with the concept of this sort of relationship. You want to fuck your half sister, go right ahead.
moonwatcher13 chapter 1 . 3/15
Am i a terrible person for finding this scenario hilarious. Because if so, then oh well. Looking forward to reading this whole thing, yay free time!
ThievesEyes chapter 18 . 2/5
I thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter, every sentence, hell, every word because it was either loving, sensual, lustful, action packed and more. I was able to empathise with Anna and Elsa immediately and that enhanced my enjoyment of reading it, thank you for creating and doing an excellent job of it, I couldn't have thought of a better book of this sort and, to be honest, it is one of the best things I have read, so thank you so much!
Guest chapter 18 . 1/17
FAV :)
Akina Akhai chapter 18 . 1/8
Damn you for torturing my heart with so many emotional fluctuations, but bless your ability to write such a complex story. Thank you for such an interesting reading experience. I cried quite a bit.
Hoppern21 chapter 18 . 12/31/2014
Words can't describe the last 11 hours of my life. This story is absolutely amazing. I cried, no lie I fucking cried. You sent me on an emotional roller coaster and it's one I desperately needed. Your story represents so much in my life and I think I may have solved some of my own dilemmas and again thank you. From a reader to an author this has been a journey. At first I only came to your story as a horny, hormone raged man, but I leave this page and your magnificent story a changed man. 18 chapters of nothing shy of pure amazing.
Thank you
Nick Hopper
Hoppern21 chapter 5 . 12/31/2014
I honestly love this story, this isn't like all the other ones out there, this isn't three chapters of lesbian sex. I wanted that i'd watch porn, but your stories take it deeper (literally and figuratively ;) lml) i love the emotions that they feel and the fact that it is 18 chapters long! I saw that and almost died of happiness! I just finished chapter 5 and am anticipating my 1/3 mark! Keep doing what you are doing!
feels for all chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
omg this is beautiful
Princess Consort Anna chapter 11 . 12/23/2014
Please, no more other ships.

dies

You've killed me with the game of emotions you play.
Princess Consort Anna chapter 10 . 12/23/2014
Fuuuuuuuuuuuu-

I'm gonna murder someone, that's all I need to say.
Princess Consort Anna chapter 8 . 12/22/2014
I really wanna strangle their dad.. Actually, since being gay is so wrong in his eyes, I'd force him to get it on with another guy, force him, see how he freaking likes it. This story has me literally worked up, oh goodness.
Princess Consort Anna chapter 5 . 12/22/2014
Ooooooh, psycho love? I'm really interested now.

This is one of the most unique stories I've read and I'm looking forward to finishing it. I'm just hoping you've kept the psycho thing the whole way through though x3
Princess Consort Anna chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
Mom: Anna has a boyfriend named Hans!

Me: WHAT!? NO! YOU LIE!

Oh my god, my reaction to this was priceless. x'D

Keep it up, lovin it.
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