Reviews for Winter Girl
June chapter 18 . 14h
Wow. I cannot find any other word. Just wow. I think this fiction is one of my favorite- no this fiction IS my favorite when it comes to Elsanna.
Your story made me laugh, it made me shiver and it even made me cry. Bravo. From now on, I will never see Elsanna the same way. (Still in a good way though)
I'm sorry if my english is kinda awful but I'm french so it can't be help haha!

Please keep writting. You're good. You're really good.

Xoxo, June
yisss chapter 2 . 5/1
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Freaking awesome so far! Shame I have to go to sleep. Work tomorrow is gonna suck because I'll be flying to finish this D:
Drunken Hamster chapter 18 . 4/23
OMG. This fic was so infuriating, saddening, and wrong.

Don't mistake my words, it was GOOD, and it gave me blue balls two days in a row, but ever since chapter 7 on I was like


You know? So yeah, good fic, but so just WRONG {not because the incest, just the way everything happened okay?}

Oh, and by the way, it's in a G!p community for some reason. Lel.

ch3n chapter 18 . 4/12 not sure if i can but...uh...THE PLOT IS COMPLETELY, COMPLETELY OUT OF THE ORIGINAL PLOT. I DID NOT EXPECT THAT THERE'LL BE SHIT-ASS ACTIONS AND SHITS LIKE DAT. no offense but...DUDE. i dont think the plot is making any sense. but hey! the great news is that you're good at writing smut. or sex scene. anyway. i still think this is a lil bit fucked up. wow. first, anna hates her, THEN, she came back and says she loves elsa. THIS IS UNBELIEVABLE. im not particulary liked it... the plot, storyline, ooc, character development is too much of a jumbled mess but your writing style is really good. you should write more less-complicated story. im not saying your story suck but its hard to keep up. keep up the g'work?
Phil 87 chapter 18 . 4/6
I just finished reading this and loved it :). I think it deserved to be longer but I mean that as a compliment, that's just how much I liked it. It was very original, especially with two different villains in the story and neither was Hans lol. I'm tempted to check out some of your other fics now :)
LordAdamant chapter 4 . 3/31
I'll be honest, I near about died when it turned out Oaken owned the shop. That was fucking hilarious. Keep up the awesome work.
moonwatcher13 chapter 7 . 3/20
He would die.
moonwatcher13 chapter 6 . 3/20
Ok, NOW it got dark. Parents raping their own children, beating their wives to death because they need to be corrected. That is dark. Compared to those events, two sisters fucking seems like child's play in comparison. Since this whole thing is already done, I seriously hope that Anna doesn't get raped. That would be almost too much to handle.
moonwatcher13 chapter 5 . 3/20
This was slightly disturbing to read, so much that the first time i had to stop. I needed to go over it again, and process what was going on. It is pretty clear that on some level they realize how fucked up their relationship is becoming. The stress of keeping everything secret, of being related, their families disapproval and so many other things seems to be wrecking them both internally.

And at the same time, they both need each other more then ever. Because all Anna has right now is Elsa, and all Elsa has right now is Anna. They accept each other, including all the nasty destructive angry parts. And that's what makes this realistic. Because people will do insane, stupid things to have somebody care about them as much as these two care about each other. And if that support is ever taken away, death seems like a pleasant alternative to the pain of being without that person. Losing them feels like you have lost your reason to live, and a hollow life isn't a life at all.

This isn't too dark. Its fucked up, disturbing and painful. But it is not dark. Dark would be if they ever actually went through with their threat, or at least tried.

And is it weird that, disturbing level of co-dependence aside, i am completely ok with the concept of this sort of relationship. You want to fuck your half sister, go right ahead.
moonwatcher13 chapter 1 . 3/15
Am i a terrible person for finding this scenario hilarious. Because if so, then oh well. Looking forward to reading this whole thing, yay free time!
ThievesEyes chapter 18 . 2/5
I thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter, every sentence, hell, every word because it was either loving, sensual, lustful, action packed and more. I was able to empathise with Anna and Elsa immediately and that enhanced my enjoyment of reading it, thank you for creating and doing an excellent job of it, I couldn't have thought of a better book of this sort and, to be honest, it is one of the best things I have read, so thank you so much!
Guest chapter 18 . 1/17
FAV :)
Akina Akhai chapter 18 . 1/8
Damn you for torturing my heart with so many emotional fluctuations, but bless your ability to write such a complex story. Thank you for such an interesting reading experience. I cried quite a bit.
Hoppern21 chapter 18 . 12/31/2014
Words can't describe the last 11 hours of my life. This story is absolutely amazing. I cried, no lie I fucking cried. You sent me on an emotional roller coaster and it's one I desperately needed. Your story represents so much in my life and I think I may have solved some of my own dilemmas and again thank you. From a reader to an author this has been a journey. At first I only came to your story as a horny, hormone raged man, but I leave this page and your magnificent story a changed man. 18 chapters of nothing shy of pure amazing.
Thank you
Nick Hopper
Hoppern21 chapter 5 . 12/31/2014
I honestly love this story, this isn't like all the other ones out there, this isn't three chapters of lesbian sex. I wanted that i'd watch porn, but your stories take it deeper (literally and figuratively ;) lml) i love the emotions that they feel and the fact that it is 18 chapters long! I saw that and almost died of happiness! I just finished chapter 5 and am anticipating my 1/3 mark! Keep doing what you are doing!
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