So sad! I cried! But good!

Wow, trippy. Sounds like Mother Brain talkin in da first bit. Very cool though. My only small nitpick would be some minor spelling errors, but that's easily fixable.

Quite good. I like the way you make her really sound as if she were talking in her last moments. Keep up the good work.

Oh man this is beeeeautiful! I like the way you made this, very well written. I enjoyed the incorporation of Fusion too! Great way to keep the section alive with new stuff. Highly enjoyed and recommended!