Reviews for What You Could Have Had (On Hold)
Guest chapter 11 . 12/12/2014
Really sucks that this is probably over. Why start a new story when you can't finish this ine? We've been waitin months for an update. Startin a new story will only help delay/end this one.
SunflowerFran chapter 4 . 12/13/2014
I think Edward just blew his chance.
SunflowerFran chapter 3 . 12/13/2014
I bet that's Bella ... but it has been eight years, so maybe not, maybe he thinks every brunette is her.
Yali.Page chapter 11 . 12/13/2014
Good Luck :)
dev12586 chapter 11 . 12/12/2014
Will be patiently waiting hopefully not too long
melissamary55 chapter 10 . 9/7/2014
love it and it seems Edward is liking been a dad
melissamary55 chapter 9 . 9/7/2014
love it and what up with Edward daughter that does not really interant with Edward that much
Guest chapter 10 . 9/4/2014
Now you have me interested in what the plot twister is!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/3/2014
Please use spell check!
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 10 . 9/5/2014
I loved it! Doesn't matter if there was no plot twist I thought it showed if "Normal" life brilliantly! Can't wait for more!
chelbee chapter 10 . 9/4/2014
Edward is coming around... love it
dipsydoodle chapter 9 . 9/4/2014
Finding his reactions funny.
ratih choco chapter 9 . 9/3/2014
they looks adorable together... (father-son moment is the best scene...) I think you should write father-daughter time too...
chelbee chapter 7 . 9/3/2014
I just found this story and I love it. I haven't gotten to chapter 9 but I wanted to review...
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 9 . 9/3/2014
Loved it! Can't wait till the next chapter too see what happens next!
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