Reviews for Matchmaking Madness
Tear of Light chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
This was a fantastic read! I truly enjoyed reading this a lot. Very nice! :)
Azonic George chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Wow nice story here. Happy endings are the best after all
Max chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
I think you should do an aftermath story about Blake and Yang's relationship after Blake's two weeks are up.
I bet the conversation would be extremely awkward and hilarious.
Ann E. Casap chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
How does this not have more favorites?! Loved every minute of this and you managed to change my views on Mr. Winchester. I no longer see him as an asshole. Watching cat Blake pounce and play with Yang always gets me. Loved the WhiteRose, too.

-Ann
destinyTail0 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Bravo! Bravo! Bravissimo! Encore, Encore! This is just brilliant! You certainly have quite the head on your shoulders. You never hesitated at all in your ideas. How you included everyone and the original flavor you wrote them is purely faithful to the show. I applaud you and your magnificent mind of yours. Cheers.
Scourge From BloodClan chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Oh wow, I couldn't stop smiling. This was perfect!
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My cheeks hurt
The Flippant Writer chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
It was an amusing story, to be sure. But I do have a few gripes about your portrayal of their characters. The most damning one was Yang's "pardon my pun". I can't imagine Yang ever apologizing for a pun, of all things. Weiss' reaction at Ruby coming through the door was wholly opposite to her character. She's more the type to express worry through irritation and anger than naked concern.

Ruby's confession to Weiss was...fast. Way too fast. The whole White Rose aspect just felt shoehorned in at the start just so you can get it out of the way. The CardinxVelvet was a surprise but it too felt shoved in just for its own sake. Cardin was a malicious bully to Velvet, and apology or no I can't imagine anyone just sweeping it under the rug and abiding by the rule of the mistletoe to their previous tormentor.

The rest of the characters were portrayed well, though, and I can look past Blake's OOC-ness on account of her heat.

Aside from my stated complaints, the story was a fun read. Good work.
crossargon chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
this is great! cardin and velvet? a very odd pairing you got there!
Pickle the chicken chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Wooo, man, what a oneshot. This was amazing.

And yeah, what a plot twist. Cardin MVP, 'course. it was a nice little touch to have VelvetxCardin in there, with Thrush as the best wingman ever :)
venshade1 chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
reading more than 17 thousand words totally worth it!