Reviews for Abandoned
Zephyr W chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Oh my God.
My heart aches. It hurts. Whyyy did I even click this link.
In other news, wow! So much emotion (than the ending of the 2011 Jane Eyre movie) is in these two short paragraphs. Nicely written. I felt like I was still reading the actual book.
Keep writing!
foureyedbabe chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
You have captured him PERFECTLY! I could never do this! You're sooo awesome! This is totally going into my favorites. :)
Bonbonnett chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
Wow! That's very good - is this meant to be the part where he calls her and she returns? I love your take on his state of mind.