Reviews for A Fly in the Ointment
JakMar chapter 10 . 7/5
Awesome chapter enjoyed that, about he pairing I say definitely keep it just Miranda, I personally prefer 1-1 romance it just seems much more meaningful, also I'm not a fan of Jacks at all. -JakMar-
zombiehunter1982 chapter 10 . 7/5
Im hoping for a jack and Miranda pearing. I think it would be funny to see their interaction with naruto
kaladin storm chapter 10 . 7/5
It's great to hear that you're doing well medically and are financially stable.
Robthekiwi121 chapter 10 . 7/5
Hanabi should not be in the pairing, not at all, Jack should though. Jack is awesome.
Shadow chapter 10 . 7/5
Another great chapter, dont know why everyones hatin on your work, the only complaint that i can see people possibly complaining about is how long it takes you to update now, which is understandable considering what youve stated in your authors notes. Keep up the great work and dont ever let 'em bring you down!
XRaiderV1 chapter 10 . 7/5
naruto/miranda/jack and as for shepard, either liara or tali...oh heck give shepard both?
Stratos263 chapter 8 . 3/1
Well shit hat was hanabi
Stratos263 chapter 7 . 3/1
Well shit what a mess they got into
Stratos263 chapter 6 . 3/1
Dammit hanabi
Stratos263 chapter 5 . 3/1
Good luck naruto
Stratos263 chapter 4 . 3/1
Dam only u Miranda
Stratos263 chapter 3 . 3/1
What a mess they got into
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 3/1
Well shit
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 2/18
At least they got out of that mess
Alex2909 chapter 9 . 9/29/2015
loving this story. wonder if liara will forgive naruto
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