|Reviews for When Good Majors Go Bad|
| LovePeaceandMusic chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Good story! An alternate way for Burns to have gone crazy! I have to say, you had me thinking Radar was going to die. Happy ending, though ;)
| Virgil Chadwick chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
I know I probably shouldn't be laughing, but...
HAHA! Frank in a rubber room, laughing hysterically!
And I could picture everything, it was very in character. Like Margaret saying that Donald was romantic, Radar talking about Stinky...
| MyJacobsBetterThanBellas chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
I thought this was a very good story! I always thought there was more to Frank than just going crazy in Tokyo!
| doc chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
A good story, but your style is choppy and a little rushed. You don't describe a practical joke and a shooting in the same manner, and subtlety and tension is the key!
| Amy chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
that was great! i loved it
| radar fan chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
lol I loved that. A great way of explaining Frank’s feelings about margarets wedding. I especially like how you included all the members.
Keep it up
| Threll chapter 1 . 9/17/2002
That was scary...no other word for it...except...scary...oh, and brilliant! YEAH! BRILLIANT! well done! This was rather interestingly great!
take a lolly from the big jar
| Divamercury chapter 1 . 5/30/2002
Very cool! Kinda freaky, but cool. Great work!
| jenben chapter 1 . 12/7/2001
What an interesting story! Don't you think, though, that the gang would have been a little more scared with a maniac on the loose trying to kill them? Nevertheless, awesome fic!
| Luscious Kinney chapter 1 . 7/24/2001
I have never threatened to cry, then laughed so hard in my life! Thank you!
| AgentLily chapter 1 . 7/8/2001
I could definately picture this! After a while, it was like I wasn't reading it anymore, I was watching it in the back of my mind! Great jokes! Great story!
| Kits chapter 1 . 6/12/2001
Good! I liked it, though it was a bit disturbing...lol on the end.
| Praetor42 chapter 1 . 3/13/2001
Very fun story, I enjoyed reading it. You should write more often. (send some of it to me)
| dazdnconfusd730 chapter 1 . 1/23/2001
I liked the story. You got Hawkeye, BJ, and Franks charecters perfect.
| KeroRocks chapter 1 . 12/20/2000
I'm confused. Most of the beginning of this story is an actual episode of M.A.S.H. Frank going nuts over Margaret marrying Penobscott is not an original idea. You just added stuff to someone elses story. You have good writing skills and hold the characterizations well, but you need to write your own story not use someone elses and just add details.