|Reviews for Never Use Shadow Clones to do Your Paper Work|
| The Russian Bear chapter 42 . 5/19
This was a great fanfic! There are so few complete stories out there, and so few of them are worth reading. I'm glad I read this, because you took an unrealistic idea, ran with it, and made a quality fanfic out of it. The spelling and grammar errors were pretty bad(and BTW: You confused 'predisposed' with 'indisposed' about a thousand times), but I applaud your characterization. I'm glad you are choosing to rewrite this story in 'Love Through Negotiation', though. You writing prowess has grown since you finished this.
| Guest chapter 26 . 5/13
So the ending was not an omake? ...I'll need some time to think...
| XXxliaaxXX chapter 42 . 5/9
I loved this story
| jmdailey13 chapter 12 . 5/9
I kind of love how everyone has basically been like let's take a nap
| jmdailey13 chapter 6 . 5/7
Another good chapter
| jmdailey13 chapter 5 . 5/7
Aww my poor baby Naruto
| jmdailey13 chapter 4 . 5/6
Lol shits about to hit the fan
| jmdailey13 chapter 3 . 5/6
That Omake was the bomb
| jmdailey13 chapter 2 . 5/6
Lol I can already see how this is going to be one of the funny serious fics
| jmdailey13 chapter 1 . 5/6
So I read all of ur current fic's chapters in had a problem in that I really liked the original characters development that u have and was sad when I ran out of chapters... Love that I can read this
| Guest chapter 26 . 4/14
You're a gross and psychotic individual. Goodbye.
| Sharingan-hater86 chapter 42 . 3/29
Congrats on finishing a very good sorry looking forward to more great stories to come
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 42 . 3/25
I wonder if anyone asked Naruto and Co. before making that movie :-P
...that is frankly a pretty awkward way to raise your kids, but can see the difficulty if you are the only approved polygamous family on the continent.
Very nice story and very nice ending, and looking forward to reading the other one now. Thank you very much!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 41 . 3/25
X-D for meeting Kushina and all her miss-assumptions and her hopes of who Yugito really is. That Kushina was 24 when she died making Yugito and Mei even older just adds to the hilarity!
Only regret is that more wives could not be there :-D
The way you put it here really drives home that it would have been more productive in canon to have kept Naruto informed and use this clone compromise. Like the part about Naruto dealing with Kushimaru
X-D sperm requests! Imagining the responses of the kages to that!
Ending was too quick, but I seriously like the idea of the living Kages holding back the 10-tails as opposed to relying upon the dead. Plus loved the general (and well deserved) treatment Sasuke got
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 39 . 3/25
Code Shark is more than a bit heartwarming if a reference to Naruto losing his arm to Kisame. His health is the worst case scenario
Very good fight scenes, and I particularly appreciated how you addressed the issue of how Obito could have just sucked up all the Jinchuuriki and the dangers of doing so. Excellent final fight