Reviews for Never Use Shadow Clones to do Your Paper Work
Lord Z3r0 chapter 1 . 1/13
i dont like fu could you kill her off and transfer the bijuu into temari or kurotsuchi either one is okay or you wanna split them into yin and yang then both get the chakra because without the chakra they are relatively weak compared to the mizukage or yugito? i know fu is kind of cute but there is a bad vibe that she is not compatible with naruto. imo fu is really really bad candidate for naruto wives because this wives roster is too much for naruto to handle and i just thinking that kurotsuchi is as bad as her but between these two i prefer kurotsuchi but you must make her really affectionate for the stability of the marriage. if you wanna make another story like these make sure the companies of the mc is capable to handle the pressure and dont make too many women. 4 is enough or you wanna make a tragedy genre harem because i havent see it i dont know how it will be didnt read your story because of one character. you could make her die and i will read your storypeace
Monster King chapter 42 . 12/24/2017
Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story I liked the pairings and how powerful Naruto got and the plot all in all good job writing the story.
Patriggles chapter 42 . 12/6/2017
You have very quickly wormed your way into being one of my favorite authors of all time. Radical! I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I loved how well you went in depth to the relationships between otherwise usually ignored characters, and its amazing. also you have nailed what is usually a gigantic pitfall in these stories: dull and unnecessary fight scenes that don't contribute anything to the story and are identical to Canon anyway. nicely done! the only thing throughout the whole story that I was consciously aware of and did not like was that Narutos relationships with Fu and Kurotsuchi was kinda ignored except for a small segment at the very beginning and received way less time and focus than his relationship with temari, yugito, and even mei, and when focused on seemed far more superficial than his other relationships. All in all, Fantastic work!
Guest chapter 20 . 10/16/2017
I've read only ONE other fic where Naruto becomes the wielder of Nuibari, yours is number two... kinda sad caus I feel that sword is the most unique of all the seven swordsmans blades... It's a freaking sewing needle, the rest can just be considered cool and/or interesting (or cutely creepy, like Samehada, oh sweet, sweet, skin-rending Samehada), but they aren't as creatively thought out as Nuibari, the helm-splitter is just a warhammer that blows-up whatever gets struck by it, the kiba blades... are kind of a joke in my opinion, probably the only blades that totally bite. [currently laughing ass off (Kiba translates into fang or something very similar sooooo...yeah)] the other blades, with the exception of Kubikiribocho, completely slip my mind at the moment, but they don't really fit Naruto... well, I guess they could, at least if there were more fics about them. Meh, whatever. Great story, looking forward to reading the rest.

...I can never remember which it is.
The Russian Bear chapter 42 . 5/19/2017
This was a great fanfic! There are so few complete stories out there, and so few of them are worth reading. I'm glad I read this, because you took an unrealistic idea, ran with it, and made a quality fanfic out of it. The spelling and grammar errors were pretty bad(and BTW: You confused 'predisposed' with 'indisposed' about a thousand times), but I applaud your characterization. I'm glad you are choosing to rewrite this story in 'Love Through Negotiation', though. You writing prowess has grown since you finished this.
Guest chapter 26 . 5/13/2017
So the ending was not an omake? ...I'll need some time to think...
XXxliaaxXX chapter 42 . 5/9/2017
I loved this story
JordanGG13 chapter 12 . 5/9/2017
I kind of love how everyone has basically been like let's take a nap
JordanGG13 chapter 6 . 5/7/2017
Another good chapter
JordanGG13 chapter 5 . 5/7/2017
Aww my poor baby Naruto
JordanGG13 chapter 4 . 5/6/2017
Lol shits about to hit the fan
JordanGG13 chapter 3 . 5/6/2017
That Omake was the bomb
JordanGG13 chapter 2 . 5/6/2017
Lol I can already see how this is going to be one of the funny serious fics
JordanGG13 chapter 1 . 5/6/2017
So I read all of ur current fic's chapters in had a problem in that I really liked the original characters development that u have and was sad when I ran out of chapters... Love that I can read this
Guest chapter 26 . 4/14/2017
You're a gross and psychotic individual. Goodbye.
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