Reviews for Never Use Shadow Clones to do Your Paper Work
RedCide47 chapter 2 . 12/22/2016
I got to say this man, Naras like Shikaku are intelligent, so I would think he would know who one of the Three Legendary Sannin of the LEAF is. Just wanted to let you know, this chap.
Guest chapter 26 . 12/17/2016
you have fucked up a perfectly good fic with these last two chapters and your naruto was piss weak get better author skills
Sonicdude8 chapter 4 . 12/8/2016
That Omake this chapter was hilarious.
Guest chapter 32 . 11/18/2016
This chapter always makes me cry.
Guest chapter 26 . 11/18/2016
This is always one of my favorite chapters!
sladerules chapter 26 . 11/3/2016
Wait! Did temari find the porn?
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 26 . 11/1/2016
Ruined your story in 2 chapters. Gimped akatsuki, lose of limbs that don't matter in the least because puppets, lose of abilities for no reason, pussified the Kyuubi, and horrible use of humor at the worst of times.

Fullmetal11791 chapter 24 . 10/14/2016
Considering that this entire story, while good, seems to be a vehicle to push the "sex doesn't equal gender" agenda, I'm finding it pretty odd that you, and all your characters, are 100% ok with rape jokes. None of the characters seem to care that Yugito literally assaulted and almost suffocated Naruto over assumed sexual assault. They all just laughed it off. And yet, consistently throughout the story, people are getting told off for assuming Gender as well as assuming other things about people.

It just seems like your priorities aren't really straight here.
The Sinful chapter 4 . 10/6/2016
I've seen a lot of really great harem stories. I've seen even more atrocious ones. The omake reminds me of the latter case, as was intended I assume. One of the worst had Naruto gaining a new fiance on every mission. By the time skip, he had a dozen I believe.
WookieMan chapter 2 . 9/4/2016
"The Burning Leaf" sounds like a terrorist organization. I was just letting you know, there have probably been countless people telling you something of a similar fashion, but just in case...
arinasution5 chapter 28 . 8/9/2016
Rickjames196 chapter 42 . 8/2/2016
Yugito would never name her kid satsuki wtfuq, I thought that was suppose to be sasgay and sakura's kid. Sasgay killed kirabi right? Yea I dun see yugi naming her kid that. Aww old naru is a wimp. Aww not pinktsuchi, but at least Naruto converted everyone to ramen. Aww temari stayed in the harem, but never gave him a kid Y.Y Poor chomei hahaha. Wonder if momo trained under the ichirakus. Hhhaha poor kuro no dust on her side. Shame he didn't name any kid haku, considering that preaching haku's ninja way got yugi to open up to him. Omg I hate you, worse ending prologue thing ever... I want to know what the meeting was bout ugh. Pretty good story, shit compared to LTN but pretty darn good.
Rickjames196 chapter 41 . 8/2/2016
Jiraiya showed him a photo of his folks, why he no recognize kushi? "like...adoptive mother" Hhahah good thing she didn't meet Mei. Hhaha friendly ghost, omg kushi is the cutest. Omg a pet, kushi, you freak. Yugi is such a snitch xD. Poor minmin, when she finds out it's his fault, she gonna take him out of shini's tummy. She was gonna name you menma ;D Aww shame bai bai kushi, she didn't even get to talk to kyu. Xd he beat kushimaru, gotta learn how to resummon the sword to himself. Wewt yugi and the kages went off to kill sasgay. Ahaha chojoro abusing his powers. Lulz he got pwned by a med nin dang. Hhaah you go girl get that emo away from your naru-chan. -Barf- Naruto should let sasgay help with the juubi and then kill his ass right after. Cmon temari perfect time to crush sasgay's head with your fan ;D "why does he get all the bitches" hahaaha.
Rickjames196 chapter 40 . 8/2/2016
Aww bee died ugh, if Naruto still saying to save sasgay, then he is a fag. Hahah shinobi shecret, loopy temari is adorkable. Xd tema is a buttslut. That'd be messed up if she cuts of her other leg by mistake. Aww so cute he wanted to name the baby in relations to chomei. Hhahah pinktsuchi, poor baby. larkspur is horrible... Aww friggin chomei spilled the beans, babies name has to be pinktsuchi. Ahaha Ne and Ko so cute.
Rickjames196 chapter 39 . 8/2/2016
Aww shit tobi is there.. well they are fucked. Awww yugi got owned. What is the mini sun thing? I didn't understand it u.U Aww fuckers got yugito and fu... Naruto is so fucking weak ugh, he didn't do shit... Oh the mini sun was temari doing kaiten non stop XD. Awww gaara too ugh. Awww jiraiya finished himself off so tsunade would go help gaara, messed up. Oh god they gonna attack obito's dumbass from inside and out and win. Sweet raenshuriken as a kombi jutsu. Hhahaha chomei just shanked him. Bwhahah chomei is killing him but they think they are the ones doing it haha. Bwhaha he spit out yugi too and now they know how to beat him.
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