Reviews for Never Use Shadow Clones to do Your Paper Work
WookieMan chapter 2 . 9/4
"The Burning Leaf" sounds like a terrorist organization. I was just letting you know, there have probably been countless people telling you something of a similar fashion, but just in case...
arinasution5 chapter 28 . 8/9
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Rickjames196 chapter 42 . 8/2
Yugito would never name her kid satsuki wtfuq, I thought that was suppose to be sasgay and sakura's kid. Sasgay killed kirabi right? Yea I dun see yugi naming her kid that. Aww old naru is a wimp. Aww not pinktsuchi, but at least Naruto converted everyone to ramen. Aww temari stayed in the harem, but never gave him a kid Y.Y Poor chomei hahaha. Wonder if momo trained under the ichirakus. Hhhaha poor kuro no dust on her side. Shame he didn't name any kid haku, considering that preaching haku's ninja way got yugi to open up to him. Omg I hate you, worse ending prologue thing ever... I want to know what the meeting was bout ugh. Pretty good story, shit compared to LTN but pretty darn good.
Rickjames196 chapter 41 . 8/2
Jiraiya showed him a photo of his folks, why he no recognize kushi? "like...adoptive mother" Hhahah good thing she didn't meet Mei. Hhaha friendly ghost, omg kushi is the cutest. Omg a pet, kushi, you freak. Yugi is such a snitch xD. Poor minmin, when she finds out it's his fault, she gonna take him out of shini's tummy. She was gonna name you menma ;D Aww shame bai bai kushi, she didn't even get to talk to kyu. Xd he beat kushimaru, gotta learn how to resummon the sword to himself. Wewt yugi and the kages went off to kill sasgay. Ahaha chojoro abusing his powers. Lulz he got pwned by a med nin dang. Hhaah you go girl get that emo away from your naru-chan. -Barf- Naruto should let sasgay help with the juubi and then kill his ass right after. Cmon temari perfect time to crush sasgay's head with your fan ;D "why does he get all the bitches" hahaaha.
Rickjames196 chapter 40 . 8/2
Aww bee died ugh, if Naruto still saying to save sasgay, then he is a fag. Hahah shinobi shecret, loopy temari is adorkable. Xd tema is a buttslut. That'd be messed up if she cuts of her other leg by mistake. Aww so cute he wanted to name the baby in relations to chomei. Hhahah pinktsuchi, poor baby. larkspur is horrible... Aww friggin chomei spilled the beans, babies name has to be pinktsuchi. Ahaha Ne and Ko so cute.
Rickjames196 chapter 39 . 8/2
Aww shit tobi is there.. well they are fucked. Awww yugi got owned. What is the mini sun thing? I didn't understand it u.U Aww fuckers got yugito and fu... Naruto is so fucking weak ugh, he didn't do shit... Oh the mini sun was temari doing kaiten non stop XD. Awww gaara too ugh. Awww jiraiya finished himself off so tsunade would go help gaara, messed up. Oh god they gonna attack obito's dumbass from inside and out and win. Sweet raenshuriken as a kombi jutsu. Hhahaha chomei just shanked him. Bwhahah chomei is killing him but they think they are the ones doing it haha. Bwhaha he spit out yugi too and now they know how to beat him.
Rickjames196 chapter 38 . 8/2
Wow jiraiya got owned by konan... He would have been no help against akatsuki considering how quickly tobi owned konan. Kamatari is such a jerk Xd. Oh oh zetsu is in the mansion. I forgot bout danzo, wonder what this plot does for his plans for the leaf. He can't take over XD. Well pein is full of himself, attacking all the kages at the same time. That's pretty much 1v1. It worked in konoha cuz there weren't any S-ranks. Here each kage can handle a path or 2 XD.
Rickjames196 chapter 37 . 8/2
Kuro slipped and fell? Why didn't yugi help her up? Aww so cute temari ran away with him cuz every1 is preggo. Hhaha fu is a freak and shadow clones don't work for sex, dang. Bwhahah they fucked him biju form. Hhaha that vendor came so close to death. "Melting you wouldn't cause any pain" ahahaa. Awww shit and the toads sent temari to the mansion.
Rickjames196 chapter 36 . 8/2
Aww Mei was trying to act like a good wife, but he thought she was mothering him. Bwhaha temari is an idjit, did they not have a peep hole on their fancy mansion? Finally he gonna learn some senjutsu, shame jiraiya boy is bout to die. Hahah tsunade is such a cute drunk lulz.
Rickjames196 chapter 35 . 8/1
Ugh Naruto is still weak shit, even with know the secret of shadowclones and having people from all the nations to train him... Lulz fail he sasgay doesn't know who one of the strongest uchiha is? Hahah temari walked in on him and Mei. Mei's was def the hottest lemon. Psh he coulda taken him on? He couldn't even track his movements... The fact that you just went into their meeting kind of threw me off. Made me click back thinking I skipped a chapter or something. Lil warning plz? Hahaha
Rickjames196 chapter 34 . 8/1
Hhaha lazy ass shadow clone. Bwhaha kuro's answer after all their heart felt reasons. Poor Mei, she got mother-zoned by her fellow sister wives. So cute Mei using all the proper words hahaa. Bwhaha wtfuq, why is kurama walking around in a naruko clone? Oh its cuz girls got better moves XD. Poor mata, she doesn't get to go out and play. Aww Naruto doesn't know if he is real or not ahaha. Bwahahaha those omakes XD. Specially number three ahaha.
Rickjames196 chapter 33 . 8/1
Awww kurama shrunk, time to go grave robbing on min min and take the other half. Hhaha Mei is mommy so he doesn't wanna call yugito that too. Hhaha ahaha min min gonna show up and see nibi there too, awkward. Ouch straight to the family jewels, lucky it wasn't a shadow clone. Min min is lucky kushi didn't revive at the same time, or he'd get a few more nut shots XD. Hhaha min min petted kyu. He didn't tell Naruto bout him having half of kyu. Wonder what min min just did. That was just an imprint, I don't think it had access to the other half of kurama. Aww poor yugito she finally decides to bang, and he forgot bout it. Omg he told her dad, Naruto wants to die. Awww hina and samui Y.Y Ahaha so cute he repeated the whole process but with fu. Woohoo lemonz.
Rickjames196 chapter 32 . 8/1
Hahah chiyo found a clue. Aww bunny ears ahah. You'd think yami would show up now that he might be dying. I hope he didn't loose kyu right when they became buddies. Aww chiyo still wasted her life saving a jinchuriki. And Naruto didn't even have to inspire her this time XD.
Rickjames196 chapter 31 . 8/1
Dang they all got k.o'ed. Oh oh gaara is there, so where is Naruto. Be fucked up if kuro aborts the baby and then they find out Naruto is dead -fade to black, end fic- Shame he hasn't done any sage training Y.Y xD kakuzu is the team's medic. Wonder whatever happened to samui. Hahah shino knew they were preggo. Aww kuro killed a family of birds Y.Y Xd flying tank. yay Naruto made them learn kombi jutsus ahaha.
Rickjames196 chapter 30 . 7/31
Wewt, timeskip. Naruto hasn't used the toads in ages. Now we know it's def not food poisoning if they bumping uglies haha. I thought as much. Hahah nibi wants to have a go. Bwhahah his super sperm beats the anti-preggo jutsu.
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