Reviews for Great Grandpa Cap
Guest chapter 2 . 10/14
18 you come legal here too and it is 21 to drink
EJR chapter 2 . 10/6
It depends on the state you're in. But you have to be an adult.
hevnhevn chapter 14 . 9/12
i don't like this part.
Guest chapter 27 . 7/29
I'll be sure to read the sequel! This is one of my favorite fanfics ever:) love your writing style, write more Spider-Man fanfics :)
Tien chapter 2 . 7/23
You did much better with your grammar in the first chapter. It feels like you either real need a beta or you could actually look up things and words you don't know. "The crowded" for example should be "the crowd," and "wheelie bed" should be either "stretcher" or "gurney." Instead of just using a totally unreal and honestly unreasonable pic for dealing with orphans, you could have taken five minutes to research it. Your story has a good premise, but your execution has left me cold.
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 26 . 7/22
I loved it could have done more hulk for my fast as I find him fun! I love tony haha his so me! Lol you did great work
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 24 . 7/22
He some one told me OK lots say I pepper pots in real life and that I just need to find my tony lol.
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 14 . 7/21
Its not bipolar its split personality my cousin had five my dad is bipolar its a switch in moods dramic change and one sec there laughing he there anger in your face . can lead to abuse or danger to them self or family with out medication and doctor cheek to make sure its working ever 2 to 3 months. Just basics there. Love the plot Tobey and Bruce be my fav I be bad as tony he he
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 6 . 7/21
Hahaha now tell tony your a science nerd bro and he adopt you as his son or make his self your uncle tony giggles! I love the story!
littlemissliketofight chapter 27 . 7/20
Did not think that I'd get so sucked into this story! loved the plot and the writing was brilliant as well! Looking forward to blitzing through the sequel next
Livy chapter 2 . 7/19
I just thought if my parents died the things were still mine I didn't know there was an age for that. It seems kinda stupid.
PharaohsMagician chapter 26 . 7/17
Amazing story. I can't wait to read the sequel. I am happy my twin told me of this story. I love how they both have family left. Than how they're all one big, happy family. I love how he was going to tell them he was Spidey and tried to help Doc Connors. It's sad what happened. I am happy they're going to continue for him though. I think he would love it. Cheers and ta. You're an amazing author and writer.
AkaDeca chapter 26 . 7/16
This was a really beautiful ending. Please do more stories like this
snowstar1016 chapter 26 . 7/8
I don't like pizza...
Travesti chapter 26 . 6/14
Such an awesome story! So cute! Very slice-of-life-ish. I wish there were many more sequels!
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