Reviews for Great Grandpa Cap
OriksGaming chapter 17 . 4/25
I can't really get into the story, what with all of the awkward phrasing and spelling errors. No offense intended, really, because I've seen way worse, but you need a beta.
OriksGaming chapter 14 . 4/25
Eh. The scene seems really, really, really forced. It also doesn't make much sense. Lizard-Connors was across the table from him, chained to a chair. He also didn't have any physical attributes better than the average man. Peter's spider sense should have alerted him well in time to dodge, probably even at a normal human speed. If his spider sense was as crappy as you're making it out to be, he'd be dead a thousand times over.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/20
This is really good so far, but I have one critique.
Peter calls floors 13-17 the "top floors" of Avengers tower.
According to the Marvel Wiki, Avengers towers has 93 floors.

Anyway, thanks for this great story!
amayranni22 chapter 27 . 3/11
je je great
LongPastMidnight chapter 26 . 3/11
I love a mushy ending now and then. great story!
MythologyStar chapter 15 . 2/25
I dunno about the charactors, I've not seen many of the Marvel movies to know...
MythologyStar chapter 10 . 2/25
AHHAAHAHHAH I'm laughing so hard! Favorite chapter so far by far!
MythologyStar chapter 2 . 2/25
Oh Peter, as if you already hadn't enough on your plate...
MythologyStar chapter 1 . 2/25
Oh god. AUNT MAY!
JuceBi chapter 25 . 2/22
I like your story very much and I know it's comming to an end, but I had to write now. I find it adorable how you write 'mopping' when you mean 'moping'. Just this picture in my head with Steve wildly mopping the floor in the Avengers living this, I really like the story line and how you put everything together logically. It's a great story and I'm glad I read it.
Thanks for sharing.
Bright Anarchy chapter 8 . 2/20
I'm going to pause at chapter 8 for a bit but this is good stuff, only a little bending of the cannon which is to be expected in fanfics. I'm enjoying things so far. I like the nervous interaction when Peter and Steve are meeting for the first time.
Scarred Triforce Dragon chapter 9 . 2/20
MerenaRose chapter 27 . 1/9
I loved it! It was sad at first but then it got so sweet. I think I cried a little. This was one of the best crossovers I've ever read. Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your stuff. :-}
Tom Holland Fan chapter 22 . 1/2
I hate Gwen!
I was hoping she would get killed off in the story...igues not
Guest chapter 6 . 1/2
I never could understand where info about tony stark being his idol came?
I mean ironman is Total jackass
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