Reviews for Black Keys
acw1 chapter 3 . 2/15/2014

IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
Looking forward to more!
understatment chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
Love the concept of it so far! Can't wait for more! :))
Guest chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
please post more
You story is awesome
muffinmom chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
Intrigued by your story premise, curious to see where you'll take this, great first chapter. Thx for sharing!
debslmac chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
melissamary55 chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
love it and cant wait to read what will happen next update soon
dipsydoodle chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
Let the adventure begin!
trutwilightfantasy chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
Naive Bella! How she missed the "it can't be delayed" is beyond me. WHY exactly can it not? Obviously there is more to the story and brother dear is being deceitful. I still can not think of a single thing that would make a perfect loving sibling give his sister to a stranger that he KNOWS she has strong feelings against. I mean WTF?! As if he has the right! I would make him pay till his dying day. Which may just be sooner than later.
dowlingnana chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
Does he call Bella, Marie? Cause the one sentence says Marie, listen to me, but, I thought/think he's speaking to Bella. JS Now that I look back he calls her Marie a lot and that's okay but you may want to explain...maybe? Sry, JS! I think I'm going to really enjoy this story, thanx ;o)
Sunflower Fran chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
I am sure that Alice is not the type of girl Bella thinks she is.
sandy4321 chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
Can't wait for more!
Shamatt0403 chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
Good start.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
Oh when will you post the next chapter?
i have a feeling that this story will be so good.
I'm alresdy loving
Hoa chapter 2 . 2/14/2014
Love your story. It's called fiction. Can't wait for more.
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