Reviews for Yet More Fragments
Tribernator chapter 32 . 5/28
This really is an entertaining setup for the "missing hokage" challenge. And it could go in so many amusing directions depending on what happened to kyuubi. You could justify just about ANYTHING with how open ended this setup is. Lets see, there is always a mystery deal with kyuubi for anything from a bloodline, to giving up some chakra permanently to whatever there, there was no mention of what the shinigami gets for winning the bet. And no telling what, if any, effect seeing how crappy narutos life has been so far to him, meaning HE could grant a boon of some sort. You could even go silly crack fic and have omakes at the end of each chapter where minato has to do stupid and embarassing things as a penalty, while naruto and crew go about their business.

Or you could go the fun route of, "Kyuubi was suppressing narutos bloodine, or caused one to be created, and now that he is gone it is revealed." Or a fairly simple, "Narutos healing has been mega boosted after having to keep him alive with a demon sealed in his gut for so long." Yeah its been done, but so has everything else, it can still be made into an interesting story. Especially since this particular setup is fairly unique. No list of hokage decrees, no jiraya using delay tactics to halt any official attempts at retribution, etc. So with danzo as hokage right away, and with the council being kind of confused about what to do now, you could make it totally unique.
Guest chapter 31 . 5/19
Yyeaah, Led has a gay crush on Superman.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/1
Every time I read Xander's freaked-out comments, I start giggling.
Cemalidor chapter 68 . 4/23
Well, at least this stomach didn't radiate killing intent.
Cemalidor chapter 41 . 4/23
I like this style, screw them over (hard). :XD (Yeah, i'm prolly more than slightly biased, even without seen that much Buffy)
Cemalidor chapter 38 . 4/23
Nice mix-up, maybe there should be more stories with a good Luthor. *shrugs* Considering the mix we got here... Superpowers, wealth and ingenious ideas/pranks... Oh dear...
Cemalidor chapter 34 . 4/22
Oh dear goddess, a corrupted Hanabi? :XD That might lead to another prodigy if she has that headstart before even entering the academy.
Cemalidor chapter 33 . 4/22
Guess what, i wondered as well from time to time with all that leaves business. :XD
Cemalidor chapter 32 . 4/22
:) Will have to check your stories if there's anywhere an extension of this.
Cemalidor chapter 27 . 4/22
You tell them X. *cheers* Ok, granted i'm more than slightly biased here, but sometimes such stories are more entertaining than overly sugarcoated ones. ;)
Cemalidor chapter 26 . 4/22
Angry Xander might be groovy. :D Let him bore Buffy a new one. Verbally spoken. ;)
Cemalidor chapter 25 . 4/22
Maybe putting some cryptic messages on the answering machine? :D
Cemalidor chapter 5 . 4/22
Maybe he should had strike a pose "I REGRET NOTHING!" :XD
Guest chapter 74 . 4/8
Tell your typist it is spelled "Saotome" and you ought to proofread their work before it gets posted.
Guest chapter 69 . 4/8
I think Ron was meant for comedic relief, not being cut down. He did have his moments. (Mostly, he needed the time to grow up and mature). In one of the first few episodes, he saved the day at his old summer-camp. Which got him noticed by a cheerleader (Tara). He dealt with Monty and got Monkey Powers. And while being evil isn't something to brag about, he was scarily proficient and competent at being an evil villain. Look at the original series finale - So the Drama. He was there for Kim and finally got the girl. Then, after the fans got the show brought back for a fourth season, that finale had Kim abducted and Ron going to help save her. And he was the one to defeat the Lowardians, not Kim. He was not given just one moment, but many. He grew, and you can tell he was only going to grow more. So, nah, he wasn't a zeppo - just someone who needed a little self-confidence. And for every time Kim did something insensitive, there was a time Kim did something good by him. There's no question that she truly cares for him. As for all of the other issues, no one is perfect, not even fictional heroes.
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