|Reviews for ApPaRiTiOn|
| Pyrokinetics chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
...Jesus Hollerin' Christ! Evil story ! Good though...
| Ud the Imp chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
From what I can see, that Shadow robot had Robotnik written all over it. Thus Eggman finally defeats Sonic, and no one even knows. That's the scariest part...
| Su Suto chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Oh, shit, I loved the end of this story! I honestly didn't expect the Shadow zombie to be a robot.
Then again, I didn't expect Sonic to die either :P
You have one of the greatest writing qualities: Surprise. One of the things I like to see in stories is unpredictability.
| RazorCardz01 chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
| Mana chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
OH NO! Sonic died... It was really good. I'll put it under my favorites. _. I like Knuckles. I'm a stupid little girl. I gave him a bunch of names. They are; Knucky, Knux, Knucky-poo,
Knucky-duck, and Knuckly-Wuckly-Puckly-Poo! I like Knuckles. He's really cool. On the Sega, I'm always Knuckles. And my dads Sonic. I AM BATMAN! Okay, no, not at all am I batman. For cryin' out loud I'm a girl! Anyways, I will be back to see if you add a funeral! Now I'm off!
| Elendraug chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
I could have SWORN I reviewed this. O_o;; Anyway, excellent work again, David. You're one of my favorite authors in the world. And this was dark, and well-written, and wonderful...got me a bit confused at the end, but I think that was the intent. Was the hologram-ish-thing supposed to be Maria? *shrug* Something. Great job - keep it up!
| Catachresis chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
Nice twist at the end, though both twists were good. I was half expecting Tikal to appear in this one. Oh well, still a creepy story with a freaky ending.
| ShadowWalker NightCrawlers sister chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
| SonicFan1 chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
Me: Oooooooh. That's awesome.
| Reiya Inc chapter 1 . 12/31/2002
I've read this but I keep forgetting to review so I finally am. Very good, the perfect Halloween fic. Keep on writting, you have a great talent.
| Brakish chapter 1 . 12/11/2002
O_o i didn't review this? *gasp* Shame on me! . I thought it was really cool. You get such awesome ideas, i swear! This one was great. _
| DeathsDragon chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
OMG! *stairing open mouthed*
OMG! *staring open mouthed again*
| Omochao Pururu chapter 1 . 10/30/2002
David, your evil!
| Slykitty chapter 1 . 10/17/2002
Yet another masterpeice, Macintyre...keep 'em comin'!
| Firechidna chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
I almost crapped my pants... o.O;;;
You're doing great, Mac. -