Reviews for Prized |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Killer cliffy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shoutout to Ron Weasley, a true friend! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hallo, kann leider kein Englisch lasse mir die Geschichte übersetzen was auf AO3 leider nicht funktioniert. Daher kann ich nur eindringlich darum bitten, dass du auch weiter hier veröffentlichst, denn deine Geschichten sind einfach nur wundervoll geschrieben und es würde etwas fehlen gerade wenn es längere Geschichten, wie diese sind. |
![]() ![]() Loads of fun! Fabulous adventure |
![]() ![]() Now ginny and hermione are evil |
![]() ![]() Dumbledor is so evil in this |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love that story ! thank you so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() This reminded me of when Khal Drogo from GoT poured gold over Daenerys's brother's head. I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for continuing to write. I'm enjoying your story. I do wonder if you've ever read? It's really lovely, and it parallels some of your ideas in this story. Lost in Oblivion by .Xanda s/11585158/1/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter makes me want to cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so sorry that you got a review from the Megan person. I realize that this story is completed as I am reviewing this but when I review an ongoing story where the last update has been a while I state "I love this story so far, and I am eagerly awaiting the next update as soon as both real life and the muse to this story allow it." I understand that real life comes before writing and that sometimes the muse for stories doesn't let you write a specific story when you want to. I do have to say that this is a wonderful story so far from what I have read. I love that Ron has quit working for the headmaster. I also love this POV chapter from Dumbles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somehow this has become so sweet. Harry worrying about Remus is tender. The kids laughing at the slippers is wonderful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why didn't they go to the chamber of secrets? It would have been closer and no one else would have been able to get in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something I don't get is that they know the prophecy and it says he has to kill Voldemort or the other way around yet they say they can't kill Voldemort, yet they can kill Harry. That doesn't make any sense. If only one can kill the other shouldn't that work both ways? Also, the horcruxes... They know Harry is one, and the diary was one, and Dumbledore went to destroy one but didn't get it. So they know there's more but they're not even trying to find any of them they're just going and all out assault and going we can't kill him oh well? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why didn't no one take Ron's memory of the ritual being performed? Yes, he wrote it down but wouldn't it have been better to actually see what happened? I mean, it did work out in the end but still. |