|Reviews for Paradise|
| heavenly93 chapter 28 . 4/19/2013
Nice idea, a Spuffy wedding.
I had trouble reading through it though. There are a lot of mistakes in the grammar which made it pretty difficult to just go with the flow and read through it easily.
Too bad Giles was completely absent the whole time, Giles is like a father to Buffy, always has been so it would only be logical if he would've been the one to give her away and not Angel seeing as Angel is Buffy's ex and Spike's grandsire. Anyway, other then that, I think Spike was a bit of a wuss. Doing everything Buffy wants not complaining, you actually made Buffy look like a spoiled whiney brat giving her everything she wants. So my tip is stay true to the characters and their personallities.
Other then that It was a nice fanfic. Hope you improve your writing skills by writing and reading more :)
| FFLjm12 chapter 28 . 11/11/2012
Enjoyed reading your story very much - Little Jessica was a treat as the connecting element from Dawn's wedding to Buffy's.
| FFLjm12 chapter 23 . 11/11/2012
The wedding decorations sound like they would look great - nice with how he is totally out of control and how all the other are making things happen.
| FFLjm12 chapter 10 . 11/11/2012
Having a great time reading your Buffy and Spike story - with Angel and Cordelia; I always felt that they missed a great opportunity with not taking their relationship into a full out love relationship. Cordelia, IMO, was a great match with Angel.
| LilFayexxx chapter 9 . 7/25/2011
tht chapter was hilarius (chapter 9) xxxx ;D
| spike1515 chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Great story! I loved that Spike was willing to commit to Buffy. Even after all of their bumps and rough spots on the road to love they still end up with each other. That is the way it is supposed to be! Thanks for giving more wonderful Spuffy to the world!
| Spuffyforever88 chapter 28 . 10/4/2003
i loved that no take that back i adored that nope words cant describe how great that was! out of a score of 1 to 10 id say 110
| Spuffy chapter 28 . 4/18/2003
Aw you should totally do a sequel and find some way for Buffy and Spike to have a baby or something like that. I love it!
| s.s chapter 28 . 4/12/2003
im sorry im just reading this but i do think it is wonderful!
| Zzickle chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Well, this story looks interesting, based on the first chapter, but I'm not sure I want to read my way through it in its current un-beta'd form. It is mainly the punctuation problems that are giving me a headache. For example: "I am 26 who is gonna marry me, Xander and Anya are married, you and Tara are married sorta, you know that whole ceremony thingy, now Dawns getting married."
Sorry, but that should NOT be *one* sentence. It should be at least 3, maybe even 4 or 5 sentences. (also, it should be Dawn's, not Dawns)
| Kiss2 chapter 1 . 1/17/2003
Hi, making my rounds of reviews cuz i haven't in a while. I really liked the fic. Even IF it is mushy and sweet. Really good job done.
Wish Spike n Buffy would get together in the show!
| timeends chapter 28 . 1/13/2003
Woww... beautiful.. wonderful ending.. *sniff*.. except that Giles is missing... Keep up the good Buffy/Spike works!
| timeends chapter 4 . 1/13/2003
yeah, more kissing please... b/s all the way!
| lil-nic-2004 chapter 28 . 1/7/2003
Great Story! Now if only Spike and Buffy would get together in the show! hehe! But thanks for finishing this one. It was really enjoyable. I look forward to reading more of your work!
| Guest chapter 28 . 12/29/2002
This is one of my favorite fanfics of all time! I hope you keep on writing more!