|Reviews for Zero no Tsukaima: Saito the Onmyoji|
| SuperiorBatman1 chapter 10 . 6/25
Love story so far like new more powerful and smarter saito as well as more mellowed out louise plus I'd rather have her this way than what she was like the anime though him wanting to be rid of familiar mark could be given more attention while still trying to unseal all of louise's magic hope louise's finance gets what's coming to him can't to see family reaction to master and apprentice contract though lastly I have feeling saito may be related to someone important in his world whether blood or adopted relative or godchild is up to debate and if he is I wonder who keep up good work and please update soon.
| kaylaevans43 chapter 4 . 6/26
He shouldnt have changed the contraft that way they would be on e1ual footing
| KMF-G chapter 10 . 6/26
Must... WAIT for another chapter...
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/24
Osmond's last reaction is pretty identical to my own on this chapter.
| Galeiam chapter 5 . 6/21
This Louise is really way too reasonable..
| Galeiam chapter 4 . 6/21
This chapter is so ridiculously Ironic considering how Louise treated Saito...
| Ilireanwri chapter 9 . 6/21
I really like the story and the pairing so far, but could you possibly consider including Kirche too? I know, in the beginning she's a total bi*** but after some time she changes and become much more likeable and even somekind of friend to Louise (as far as I remember. it's been years since I watched the anime) and I think, she would be a funny addition to the group.
| Ilireanwri chapter 10 . 6/20
Great Idea turning Saito into a Mage too. I like it. I'm looking forward to the next Chapter :-)
| Galeiam chapter 3 . 6/20
Of course you should include Tiffania...
| Raethor chapter 3 . 6/16
Why is Saito giving them permission to use his given name? He barely knows them, and calling him by his given name is a sign of closeness, or an insult if they aren't close.
| Raethor chapter 2 . 6/16
How do they know that the Familiar ritual would provide translation, as far as they know Human summoning is unheard of.
Unless you changed the time, the Summoning Ritual was in the middle of the day, how are the moons showing?
| Raethor chapter 1 . 6/16
How does Louise know that Tabitha is Gallian? Kirche, Tabitha's best and only friend didn't know that until the two of them went to Tabitha's house, which required them to leave the country.
| Sigma-del-Prisium chapter 10 . 6/15
Well looks like Kaeda just issued a challenge for combat. Looking forward to see the possible duel.
| Aburg76 chapter 10 . 6/14
ooh the last bit was smooth. I can't wait for more
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/14
Having only recently found the Familiar to Zero, and watching 2.5 seasons worth, I decided to look for a good story. I have read some of your other works and when I saw that you had one for said series I grew curios. And I am glad I didn't skip out on this as I'm now hooked on your story and can't wait to see what happens next. From the first chapter to the latest I couldn't stop reading. In less than 2 days I finished this and I must say you have one amazing tale of fan fiction here. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what else you'll have in store for us the readers.