|Reviews for Voidwalker|
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/22
Best. Dark Souls. Crossover. Fanfic. Ever. Period. Don't. Let. This. Die. Or. I. Call. Manus. To. Haunt. You. ( don't know why put a lot of periods.
| ArthurMacGuffin chapter 10 . 9/22
It is on this day that we celebrate an author that is able to rival the Abyss as a sadist
| Chocostinne chapter 10 . 9/18
i love you for writing this
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/13
please update this godly piece of work soon. Also PRAISE THE SUN!
| The Lone Swordswolf chapter 10 . 8/24
Will Ciaran ever get to Artorias? What will happen when she and Mathilda meet?
That's all I got (or at least all I can remember right now).
| Anon chapter 10 . 8/16
Would it be a good idea if Saito and Louise ever met? If they did, then I'm assuming was a way to get to Halkeginia from Lordran; hopefully the reverse would also be true.
| tamagat chapter 1 . 8/13
yuri... meh i can live with that.
| Kirit0 SAO chapter 3 . 8/2
I'm really enjoying your fic but there's one thing that's really getting under my skin... Artorias is left handed. I know its a small thing but it just bugs me when ppl make him right handed, sorry just had to tell you. Other than that keep up the good work!
| Kirit0 SAO chapter 1 . 8/2
Pretty good so far like the Chosen undead hes awesome. Now to answer the questions!
1. Fire in your soul
2. Dunno not seen it yet
3. Who are they
4. Black Iron TARKUS
6. erm... Death?
7. Leo Ornstein an American Composer
8. Seth the scaleless or Gwynevere
has gears in the sky
| Akritedes chapter 4 . 7/25
Blah, can't do this anymore. Too much whiplash in and out of story flow and suspension of disbelief. Too much attempting to be serious and then veering into parody/crack-fic style writing.
| Akritedes chapter 3 . 7/25
A point that may have been made: interjecting author's notes into the middle of the story text is, to put it bluntly, not only bad writing but extremely disorienting for the reader to encounter, much like reading a book and turning the page only to find a full page advertisement for male enhancement drugs would be.
...there is also, of course, the odd interjection of Japanese honorifics into a culture/society that has no inkling of Japanese language or culture, especially when only one entirely non-Japanese person uses them, although several of the other nominally French/Tristanian students use solitary Japanese words. While I understand that the source material is in fact Japanese, the setting is explicitly not and there are only a very few people who can legitimately even claim to use Japanese, and none of them are speaking in this case. It is, once again, rather jarring and disruptive to the story flow, breaking suspension of disbelief and immersion quite badly.
This seems to be a pattern.
| Akritedes chapter 2 . 7/25
Not sure if this has been pointed out already, although if you've got a beta it should have been. You have a BAD case of jumping between past and present tenses, sometimes even within the same paragraph. It's jarring and irritating to go from a narration of past events to one that is being spoken of in the present tense.
| Unkillable chapter 5 . 7/17
CU's appearence "Familiar"...
I really hope that it isn't who I think it is.
Unfortunately, you capped the familiar, so it might just be Saito.
Goddamnit, and I was liking CU at that.
(Will celebrate though, because either I'm wrong and it isn't that pervert, which is a yay, or I'm right and guessed his identity in less than a second, which is still a yay).
Aside from my "F*ck Saito" attitude, I like the story so far. Can't really add anything of note, but whatever.
| trninjakiller chapter 3 . 7/15
I'm done with this cliche bipolar nonsense.
| akix058 chapter 1 . 7/3
At first i was a bit puzzled about a crossover between ZNT and Dark souls, but i have to admit that i'm really loving this story. Good job bro, and keep praising the sun!