|Reviews for A Thin Dark Line|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15
Can not wait for more :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
I check your profile a lot because you're my favourite fanfic author so I'm always eager for new things from you. When I saw that you'd posted this I couldn't wait to read it and after I had read it I was like "wow, is it my birthday!?"
I can't wait for the next chapter of this and your other a/p stories!
(Also congrats on getting married!)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11
| froovygirl chapter 1 . 2/11
I did a little cheer when I noticed this. I agree with the others; wouldn't have seen it if I hadn't been in your profile, and that would be a shame.
Your Anakin and Padme are among the best in fanfic as far as character; noble without a fault, loyal to their causes and especially to each other, outrageously passionate. Some might not like the explicit nature of your writing, but I adore this end of the spectrum, since we got so little of "in love" Ani and Padme in AOTC/ROTS. The passion is scalding, but it's the intimacy behind it that makes this worth reading to me. They're sexy, but it's because they love each other and not just the "let's f- each other's brains out."
Nicely done, friend. Congratulations on your successes and your marriage. I look forward to reading more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
| ambre chapter 1 . 2/9
your story is hard to find,put in anakin / padme!
Great chapter I love your style!
| angie chapter 1 . 2/9
I really like your stories, and this one is off to an intriguing start! You write romance between Anakin and Padme very well, thank you for coming back and writing A/P again! I am waiting for the updates on your other stories, as well. Congratulations on your marriage!
| ambre chapter 1 . 2/9
it's hard to find your story! Puts anakin skywalker / padme amidala, no anakin only!
very good start I love your style! more soon I hope!
| Resikat chapter 1 . 2/8
First off, I have to say that I have read all your stories and just adore your work. You, my dear author, are one of the best ones this site has to offer. I was saddened to think that you hadn't written anything in a while and then I was pleasantly surprised when I saw this. I love this story and how it's just pretty much going to be one-shots during the clone wars. I can't wait for more and hope that you update soon.
| Vivss chapter 1 . 2/9
Hey good start!
I really like how you write Padme and Anakin relationship.