Reviews for Beauty and the Beast
Lady Shadow92 chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
That was so beautiful I just started playing this game with my boyfriend and fell in love with these characters we haven't finished the game yet so hopefully nothing bad happens to these characters wonderful story
IcKarl chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
That's nice, in really this couple I like it, the beast's attitude is something cute XD, a good husband, I love it, god job
MPoutine chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
LOL.
Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
["What's going on, what's happening?" He asked.]
If there’s a speech verb, it’s not considered the start of a new sentence, so 'he' shouldn't be capitalized.

Also make sure to add punctuation inside the quotes. You do it sometimes, but not always.

[ok]
It's written 'okay'.

["What? You can't! This isn't a place for someone like you, look at what happened in room 207, look at what happened right under your nose! That could have been you, Beauty!"]

This is really good except for that small part where Beast says Beauty shouldn't work there because she's not a prostitute, and the way it's implied there makes it seem as if prostitutes matter less than other people.

Not bad though. Really like how Beauty manages herself and insists she can.
heidipoo chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
I liked this a lot.
Mermaid Ninja chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Lovely!