|Reviews for Dreaming of the finishing line|
| ZeroTheFox chapter 5 . 4/8
Can you please continue this pretty please i thought it was brilliant so please continue this
| Littwink chapter 5 . 4/4
This story is AMAZING! Hamish is the best and I love how he interacts with everyone. I'm a bit sad that this isn't continued, but what can you do V(_)V
| Lucy Gaol chapter 5 . 3/10
| Ms.Dimple chapter 5 . 3/8
I am officially hooked, love the 's so beautiful.I wish there were you can find time, can you give us an update?
| dantexsin chapter 5 . 3/7
Please write more to this! I love it so much!
| Scarlet Lupin chapter 5 . 1/23
i love this its great please keep up the amazing work and update again soon! cheers.
| PerseusOndineKelevraBlack chapter 5 . 1/19
I am very interested in to where you can take this story, there is so my paths you can take and I am fascinated what path yu will choose next. I hope you find your muse again and continue the story! I am interested in how the characters will deal with each other for instance will Sherlock still be distant with Harry and continue to anylize him at the same time as finding him insignificant. Or will Sherlock try to uravel Harry while at the same time as being an older bother or even a father to him. Also random question will Harry receive two parents? As in John/Mary or John/Sherlock or John/Microft? Or just sherlock or sherlock and John but them nto in a relationship. Anyway's enough rambling I hope you have a great day and I hope and look forward to what you come up with!
| Rebecca chapter 5 . 11/29/2016
So good please update!
| SH chapter 5 . 10/18/2016
Yep, still think this is very interesting! Layered. Complex. Compelling. I think Sherlock could help Hamish and vice versa. I wish you'd continue ;)
| Virodeil chapter 5 . 10/17/2016
It's confusing at first, but no doubt it's powerful. I love it. Please continue? I love Hamish.
| AliceHeart13 chapter 5 . 9/25/2016
| insane devill chapter 5 . 9/23/2016
unholy hell you write well!
i enjoyed reading that a lot . loved crazy harry , you describe the sense of detachment an immortal being feels with vigor that i envy, i keep flipping between wanting to hug poor harry and sharing a tear or with him over my camp out in the desert in front of my fire pit (sorry that was my insanity speaking and im too laze to delete it) and the hints you drop weather subconsciously or not are exquisite.
the only thing that bumped me out was harrys effects or rather lack of them, but i suppose you already have a moment planned, if not i will be rather disappointed .
pm me if u want to discuss this im gonna go read your other stories.
although i may benefit from some sleep seeing as ive been awake for ... damn 86 hours.
| SH chapter 5 . 8/27/2016
So very, very intriguing that I searched it out again, even if it's just the start of the story
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/8/2016
Can you write some more? What is the crime sence going to be like?
| Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 5 . 7/17/2016