Reviews for Initiate
almostNEET chapter 37 . 4/21
this is actually something i'm worried about. when old voldy comes back he will seek out his old followers and their families and Draco will either join Harry openly or be a double agent, but pulling that off would require occlumency which he hasn't even started yet! huh, maybe worried was an understatement.

quirell's a dick. not evil, but not redeemed either.
almostNEET chapter 36 . 4/21
embarrassing fact but i jumped on the Draco-Ginny ship the moment he called her She-Weasley. it wasn't exclusive of course, since we were too early in the series to be sure of anything and i am not stupid enough to do so (or at least not then).
almostNEET chapter 35 . 4/21
this was a clever twist on the canon chapter
almostNEET chapter 34 . 4/21
Handy, having a loyal house-elf isn't it?
almostNEET chapter 33 . 4/21
inner struggle Draco, is hardly able to put you down!
almostNEET chapter 31 . 4/21
*cue the suspenseful music*

for this one i really thought Sirius was dead. the pieces all fit, it was the perfect call back to canon, it was the third time that Sirius had felt in mortal danger throughout the two fics, it was near the ending and finally you had shown your severe side in crippling Snape.
almostNEET chapter 30 . 4/20
yeah this shocked me, he fucking lost a leg! i mean, yeah that was Voldy's plan in the canon when he put Snape into Fluffy but that was ruthless!
almostNEET chapter 28 . 4/20
don't be miffed Draco. Sirius hardly refuses Harry anything while Severus hardly gives up anything he doesn't want to. Snape did make a mistake though unlucky as it was, his lie probably wouldn't have been caught if it hadn't been shot down before.
almostNEET chapter 27 . 4/20
and some things still happen. surprising that they weren't ostracized because of the 200 point loss this time.
almostNEET chapter 26 . 4/20
and whatever suspicions i had got thrown off on this chapter. fucking red herrings!
also really Harry try not to forget your dreams, they are of extreme plot importance.
almostNEET chapter 24 . 4/20
be careful what you wish for Draco. funny how even during the holidays Snape's appearance is more than enough to put the fear of god in students.
almostNEET chapter 23 . 4/20
shouldn't Percy be studying for O.W.L.s. he's a fifth year after all.
and Narcissa's POV are much more of a downer now.
almostNEET chapter 22 . 4/20
ding ding ding! a bit surprised Sirius doesn't know Voldy's name.
almostNEET chapter 16 . 4/20
the foul-mouthed Sir Rudy makes a reappearance. and no Ron, it's from an older generation. the fact that only Draco appeared to be the intelligent Gryffindor in the conversation about the third floor was hilarious, especially his "you're idiots" response to harry and ron's patting themselves on the back with their supposed "clever" plan. and we get some data about the Greengrasses from the conversation snippets which is also good.
almostNEET chapter 15 . 4/20
and entertaining, for us readers of course!
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