Reviews for The Salty Venom of Human Tears
Konohashinobi07 chapter 1 . 6/9
This was really good. I would like to see a new version on the tent scene and impending battle. You should maybe think of redoing Eclipse in it's entirety.
kiwihipp chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
That was really intense! I had no idea that Edward felt so lost when Bella went to see Jacob. I hope he tells her or that she finds out eventually!
J.DRAST chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Hello. I LOVED your "spin" on this scenario with Edward & Bella. The tent scene/impending battle would be nice to have a oneshot with your "spin" on it also. Your words were so depicting of the feelings that Edward was experiencing, it was almost real, like watching it on a tv screen or something. Thanks for the entertaining read. Suzan Noerr
roon0 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I love an o/s on the tent scene.

I know that you are going to disagree but I always thought Eclipse was payback for New Moon. Edward left her saying horrible things and discounted everything she wanted. Jacob was justified punishment if you ask me. Only saying.
Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I would love to read any Eclipse moment. It would be great to see from Edward's pov.
robela chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I like it!
detsinbaby chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Awwwww! So sweet.