|Reviews for The Salty Venom of Human Tears|
| Konohashinobi07 chapter 1 . 6/9
This was really good. I would like to see a new version on the tent scene and impending battle. You should maybe think of redoing Eclipse in it's entirety.
| kiwihipp chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
That was really intense! I had no idea that Edward felt so lost when Bella went to see Jacob. I hope he tells her or that she finds out eventually!
| J.DRAST chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Hello. I LOVED your "spin" on this scenario with Edward & Bella. The tent scene/impending battle would be nice to have a oneshot with your "spin" on it also. Your words were so depicting of the feelings that Edward was experiencing, it was almost real, like watching it on a tv screen or something. Thanks for the entertaining read. Suzan Noerr
| roon0 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I love an o/s on the tent scene.
I know that you are going to disagree but I always thought Eclipse was payback for New Moon. Edward left her saying horrible things and discounted everything she wanted. Jacob was justified punishment if you ask me. Only saying.
| Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I would love to read any Eclipse moment. It would be great to see from Edward's pov.
| robela chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I like it!
| detsinbaby chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Awwwww! So sweet.