Reviews for Shinobi Chronicles: A New World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit, how frustrating. Why the hell does he train so much with Kurama if he's afraid to use his power? That's just torture for the reader |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is officially dead and so is the writer. better to just delete it all together |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isnt dbz a little to much for Naruto? |
![]() ![]() ![]() bro can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() lost all interest with Naruto saying he never killed anyone alive lol IDC what anyone said he talked pain into killing himself lmao that shit still count's as murder lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() even though your ancestor said he was gonna kill him regardless of the answers you want dumbass |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do I feel like that's Artemis |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1/2 I mean |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does this remind me of ranma 1/1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean technically she did achieve her dream so... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is stupid... naruto can't balance on bicycle, bitch the sage arts training was for balance... this simple thing he is not able to do or r just making it the excuse for interactions BTW others |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fic is absolutely terrific but sometimes the dialouges are too cringy ... he speaks of his troubled past to strangers but hides from his friends |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice training |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Before I go any further, I will say this now. Please keep in mind the things said in this chapter when it comes to his skills and level of those skills. And then go to the first chapter for an example of what his power and skill was BEFORE he gained these skills and powers. Now put them together and think of the things he could do, and the level of strength he has, which he now has mastery of in control. Now take all that and compare it to the characters in the future chapters. Now please keep in mind that you yourself as the author stated these things, and stated what he is capable of, which means that for this story it is established as truth. So please do not pull some twist where he is weaker than radditz or nappa. Otherwise it will contradict what you have already stated in this chapter. |