Reviews for Invisible Fox
Child of Dreams chapter 29 . 10/8
Samehada's wielder's name is Hoshigaki Kisame, not Kisami...
AliceMadelineSennen chapter 12 . 9/12
Bueno, que yo sepa, no era permitido que una chica durmiera con su novio, sobre todo si era su prometido. Siempre debían tener un chaperón para que la chica se mantuviera virgen hasta el matrimonio. Esto se llevaba a cabo en especial en las nobles familias.
Blue-Happens chapter 34 . 7/25
what the fu-
I guess you needed to leave as little cliff hangers as possible if you wanted to just end it like that. but the sudden revival is sudden, it feels like it needed a lot more gravitas to be earned
Anyanwu chapter 34 . 7/24
Please, Amaterasu. Respect the goddess who plunged the world into darkness until they lured her out with hit dancing babes.
Blue-Happens chapter 8 . 7/24
why is hinata calling him naruto so goddamn often?

it's not his name, and hasn't been his name for years! it is absurd that she would switch between the two names instead of always calling him ruto.

there are other ways for people to find out, jeeze.

(it's not like it's a secret anymore, almost all the clan heads know, the hokage knows, some random academy brats found out. there is no way that everybody who cares to look doesn't know this)
Blue-Happens chapter 4 . 7/24
what kind of madman puts two toddlers into a separate building, with no supervision.

the clan head immediately takes advantage of naruto's family stuff, drops his eldest on him like unwanted refuse, then binds him to his family via betrothal contract within minutes of meeting him?

Blue-Happens chapter 3 . 7/24
I remember reading this a long while ago, and being really invested in the invisible ninja thing, but on re-reading I am disconcerted by how extremely young they are, and how soon the author puts them in sus situations

lil kids dont think about that stuff

naruto as a property has always treated very young children as mini adults, (see kakashi graduating at 6 or something ridiculous) but it's still weird
Vishw chapter 2 . 6/3
Writing bathing mishaps of 6-year-olds, talk about creepy.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 3 . 5/9
"There will be certain conditions, though. You need to be examined to find out if your invisibility is a Kekkai Genkai. If it is, the Hyuuga will support you in starting your own clan, although Hinata will receive the Sleeping Bird seal so that any children inherit your bloodline only. If it isn't a bloodline, you will marry into the Hyuuga clan, although no seals will be required because of how much you have already done for the clan.

"Either way, we will help you retrieve your clan scrolls from the vault underneath the wreckage of your father's house and on behalf of the clan, I ask for permission to learn the Rasengan as it may prove very advantageous to our Jyuuken."

WolfSongGirl chapter 14 . 3/14
Huh. I was reading the bit about how Naruto sees- since his children will inherit his bloodline but chakra reserves grow over time, does that mean his children will be blind for the first few years of their life at least, colorblind for a few years after that, and have to avoid chakra training until they are older? Even with Uzumaki chakra levels, they won't have as much as Naruto does, being a Jinchuuriki. Then again, learning to fight and live while blind might be good practice for using too much chakra later on, and also an intrinsic warning against over reliance on their bloodline, since if they can learn to fight without seeing their opponent so can others... So maybe they won't hold off on chakra training, and just use the blindness as more training... Interesting to think about!
WearyCurmudgeon chapter 34 . 1/14
IF you ever return to this story...

IIRC, Itachi knows how to use exploding clones. I'm honestly surprised he never taught that technique to Naruto.

Combine that with Naruto's clones being invisible and their hanging into kunai or shuriken.

That would be a very nasty combo.

Hell, if they can henge into say a swallow or humming bird and actually fly, than that allows him to further counter Deidara.

More than likely Sasori, Zetsu and Orochimaru as well. Maybe on Kakazu and that maybe is because he's paired with Naka who can see the clones. Otherwise he too would fall prey to that technique.

Konan... Unknown, due to her own paper bloodline.

That brings things a tad more into parity considering the power creep in Shippuden.
KvAT chapter 1 . 1/14
Hmm, nice start, although Naruto's declaration seems way too mature for the 5-year-old he's supposedly is.
E.Elliot chapter 34 . 1/10
I love it!thanks for the amazing story!
Refraction25 chapter 1 . 1/5
I've been ruined, I actually felt disappointed that this wasn't some Narutofied version of Invisible Dragon.
MoinLeute chapter 16 . 12/29/2022
Adept is a stage below Master, not the other way around...
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