|Reviews for The Blaze|
| CalledDankMemes chapter 1 . 5/31
| writingisrelaxing chapter 1 . 5/26
I remember I felt like this once. Like Wander. I couldn't avoid imagining the people that were in danger as myself. Or worse; as people I loved. Just thinking about them getting hurt made ME feel hurt. Literally; physical pain. It's a weird thing the mind does when you have too much of something called simpathy. I can understand him completely.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
very cute and in character!
| pam chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
This should be an inspirational quote: "99% of the time,, when we listen to our hearts, we end up doing right. It may take us to the long, totally crazy scenic route,but it always leads us right."
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
I love the ending
It's pure genius.
Also, I watch the show alot and know what all their voices sound like, is it weird I read it all in character voice...?
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
Nice little one shot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
This was great! Just like an episode!
| Indigo chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
That was terribly cute.
| Netbug009 chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
This is fantastic. You really manage to show a dark, dangerous extreme of Wander's urge to help while still keeping him in character. I'm not sure how healthy it is that the story seems to end on a message of following your instinct, though, especially in a situation like this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
*squees* Aww, this was perfect!
| ArkieR chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
This is awesome! I love WOY angst. :')
| Edhla chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
I'm canon blind, but thought this was a great piece. Wander's good nature and desperate need to be useful comes through really clearly, and your dialogue sounds really natural.
A minor error around punctuation - "dialogue tags" are separated from dialogue with a comma, like this:
["Yeah," said one.
"I guess so," said another.]
| kittycat212 chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
:0 I don't like this fanfiction... I FLARPIN LOVE IT!I saw this on tumblr
| dalek chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I don't know that this was angst-y as much as it was sweet. It was sort of ironic that the fireman wouldn't let her in, as Wander was in the same situation with her. I really loved this though, keep up the good work!