Peter has been dicking Neal over all season. What a douche good story you should write longer stories

I been pissed at Peter all season how could he treat Neal that way. like your story.

You caught Neal's hurt and pain so very well. Congrats. Only the people we love can hurt us so severely and that's the case here. I'm thrilled to see you writing again

Nice story, this season is just so wrong. I hate that they are fighting, and Peter has been just awful to Neal since he got out of prison.

Poor Neal good job

Neal's pain from this just breaks my heart. Good job.