Reviews for Thorin's Bath
Seltika chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
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Wynni chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
motherin' mercy woman
query4 chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
This needs a lot of spacing. It's hard to read when it's all in one block. Try separating the lines of conversation from the descriptions to make smaller paragraphs. It'll be easier to read and will allow for better pacing of the story.
Just4Me chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
""Admire, console and dote" is actually pretty good advice. I'm so glad you posted this.
insanity and co chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
I liked it, but found it really difficult to read because it's all one giant paragraph. Make sure to separate them out before posting!