|Reviews for The Snake and the Broken Lioness|
| roon0 chapter 6 . 10/7/2014
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 6 . 8/22/2014
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2014
Oh my cant wait to read more
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 5 . 5/11/2014
Nice, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
I think that you have a very good concept here. It is, perhaps, in need of a bit of polishing. Perhaps the use of a beta would be good in this instant.
For instance, the lines
"A raven colour polluted the sky; it ripped the pastel blue day-light sky into shards, so now only the blackness was shown in the sky. The heavens had opened pouring its contents on any willing civilian to walk in its harsh path",
might read better as
"A raven colour polluted the pastel blue daylight sky, swelling and overtaking until there was only darkness. The heavens opened, pouring its contents on anyone unfortunate to be caught in its merciless anger."
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
Great, keep it coming. Happy Early Easter!
| Little-Pen87 chapter 3 . 4/8/2014
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 3 . 4/4/2014
This story is so stupid and dumb, April Fools!
| onecelestialbeing chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
This is simply beautiful! I hope you update soon!
| Rea558750 chapter 2 . 2/24/2014
Awe poor sev :(
| KDL1972 chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Great story so far, can't wait for more :-)
| Rea558750 chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Can't wait for more
| Mama Shmi chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
oh poor Hermione!
| Last American chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Interesting work, don't stop writing